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10/25/2015 c1 3BFangz
Not a bad story. Well crafted.
However, the ending seems unfinished.
sigh
9/29/2015 c1 9Waxing Shadow
This one here's a very interesting offering. You seem to have a very good handle on something I myself struggle with: painting a scene. I could tell the thoughts and feelings of Alis, Elisabeth, and the drunk guy just by how you wrote it. In short, you paint really good pictures. I'd love to read more of your stuff. By all means, keep on writing!

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