for The Burden of Knowledge10/11/2015 c2 
14Scott Pilgrim
Again, another great chapter! I love how Virgil reacts to liking Ashlyn. And as for the Settlers of Catan game, I know what that is! I've played it before! Super competitive game. Again, I didn't see any grammar errors, and the cliffhanger was great.
Stay frosty.
Scotty P.
14Scott PilgrimAgain, another great chapter! I love how Virgil reacts to liking Ashlyn. And as for the Settlers of Catan game, I know what that is! I've played it before! Super competitive game. Again, I didn't see any grammar errors, and the cliffhanger was great.
Stay frosty.
Scotty P.
10/9/2015 c1 Scott Pilgrim
Wow. Amazing start to this story. The banter between Virgil and Aeson is witty and flows nicely along with the story. Also, very creative with all the different magical ingredients. It reminds me of Jim Butcher's "The Dresden Files." Keep up the great work!
Stay frosty,
Scotty P.
Wow. Amazing start to this story. The banter between Virgil and Aeson is witty and flows nicely along with the story. Also, very creative with all the different magical ingredients. It reminds me of Jim Butcher's "The Dresden Files." Keep up the great work!
Stay frosty,
Scotty P.