for Clean Sweep10/24/2015 c2 
1Red-Damascus-Steel
This chapter was absolutely WICKED!
You brilliantly crazy author, you! I love this.
This is awesome ;-; I can tell this is a totally different character; the last one was a total germiphobe lol I can't imagine him sticking his fingers in some dude's mouth like that xI Plus, he seems to have a fascination with the human body. Either that, or he's just the kinda guy that's a book worm and knows A LOT of facts and stuff. Hehe, 207th bone. That was a good one yo lol I was a bit confused with the 30 minus 6 bit but then I remembered he said he had all his wisdom teeth removed lol so that makes the 20 lol Way awesome!
Now, my REAL question is he some type of vigilante? Or was that girl being attacked happening to coincide with his need for violence and blood? Or is he just some random dude who just despises rape and he happens to be omega violent? I dunno! It's so good xI
It's good to leave a reader with all sorts of questions.
I can't wait for everything to unfold and connect! I'm looking forward to watching this unravel!
More, please :3
1Red-Damascus-SteelThis chapter was absolutely WICKED!
You brilliantly crazy author, you! I love this.
This is awesome ;-; I can tell this is a totally different character; the last one was a total germiphobe lol I can't imagine him sticking his fingers in some dude's mouth like that xI Plus, he seems to have a fascination with the human body. Either that, or he's just the kinda guy that's a book worm and knows A LOT of facts and stuff. Hehe, 207th bone. That was a good one yo lol I was a bit confused with the 30 minus 6 bit but then I remembered he said he had all his wisdom teeth removed lol so that makes the 20 lol Way awesome!
Now, my REAL question is he some type of vigilante? Or was that girl being attacked happening to coincide with his need for violence and blood? Or is he just some random dude who just despises rape and he happens to be omega violent? I dunno! It's so good xI
It's good to leave a reader with all sorts of questions.
I can't wait for everything to unfold and connect! I'm looking forward to watching this unravel!
More, please :3
10/10/2015 c1 Red-Damascus-Steel
Hmm, interesting. I like. So, I guess kill bill inspired his use of the katana? It wasn't as explicit as I thought it was gonna be, but still, it was written very well. This man clearly has OCD and seems to be a bit of a germiphobe. I'm surprised he was willing to eat a poptart from that gross apartment. Still, well done. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Hmm, interesting. I like. So, I guess kill bill inspired his use of the katana? It wasn't as explicit as I thought it was gonna be, but still, it was written very well. This man clearly has OCD and seems to be a bit of a germiphobe. I'm surprised he was willing to eat a poptart from that gross apartment. Still, well done. I'm looking forward to reading more.