
10/16/2015 c1
4venatianwings
I loved the ending - couple of stanzas description of the leaves as plucked thoughts and rust fallen - brilliant! I'm a little confused though... this started out more like the 'she' was being chalked up as winter and then it somehow switched to being autumn?

I loved the ending - couple of stanzas description of the leaves as plucked thoughts and rust fallen - brilliant! I'm a little confused though... this started out more like the 'she' was being chalked up as winter and then it somehow switched to being autumn?