10/20/2015 c1 26Zukafu Chiriamoto
Aww, this is incredibly sweet and written in such a way with a sense of realism that makes me query if this was an actual event which you, Mr Writer, have experienced... I can say, as someone who may have had a similar sort of experience in the past, think you nailed it regardless. A very lovely piece and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
~ Zukafu