10/8/2016 c1 Fancyandwhimsy
I liked it.

1/6/2016 c1 5TMSantos
I think this one's beautiful. Like the first one. :)

10/28/2015 c1 3Da Kaleidoscope
cli·ché
klēˈSHā/
noun
noun: cliché; plural noun: clichés; noun: cliche; plural noun: cliches
1.
a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought.
"the old cliché “one man's meat is another man's poison.”"
synonyms:platitude, hackneyed phrase, commonplace, banality, old saying, maxim, truism, stock phrase, trite phrase; old chestnut
"a good speechwriter will steer clear of clichés"
a very predictable or unoriginal thing or person.
"each building is a mishmash of tired clichés"
2.
PRINTINGBRITISH
a stereotype or electrotype.
Origin

mid 19th century: French, past participle (used as a noun) of clicher ‘to stereotype.’
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10/26/2015 c1 more-than-inactive
Wyatt reminds me of the senior in my(ironically) writing class! xD He's always setting stuff on fire. I liked this piece, though I'm curious to know Talia's background. As to your question? Brilliant.

10/25/2015 c1 4SnowflakeSoup
Ooh! Interesting. I like Wyatt's POV.
I feel like there were a few times where I thought the sentence structure was a little awkward, but other than that it was pretty good!
Hope you can update your other stuff soon :)

-Snowflake