10/27/2015 c1 26Zukafu Chiriamoto
Me whilst reading:
Oh dear, what are these kids doing? This can't be good... No put the Ouiji board away. And seriously guys, stop, serial killers don't like couples "get together". No. No. No no no. Never play with Ouiji boards. NEVER play with Ouiji boards... chants those few words over and over and over again until the end...
This is why I say "never play with Ouiji boards".

Okay, actual sensible reviewing now:
Very creepy and very much getting me into that Halloween feeling.
My main and only quibble is the Ouiji's message wasn't really relevant in the end. I mean, "murder, betrayal, revenge" never happened exactly. I mean the spirits successfully freaked the kids (and me) out and that drove them insane enough to all wind up dead. So, good job in that respect spirits. I don't know, I guess I just feel the message was supposed to be meaningful and I can't see how it is... blargh.
All that aside, I enjoyed reading - and my pup was amused by my excited accompanying commentary - this story so thanks for sharing!
~ Zukafu