for Love and Death3/11/2016 c1 
46CorkyBookworm1
Why capitalize "death" and not "love"? Hmm, there were four lines in the middle that just took my break away, starting at "Love makes you cry." That is such a beautifully constructed thought.
46CorkyBookworm1Why capitalize "death" and not "love"? Hmm, there were four lines in the middle that just took my break away, starting at "Love makes you cry." That is such a beautifully constructed thought.
3/10/2016 c1 4Amy Greene
This is really good! Thanks for liking my poem! it really means a lot to me. you are one of the only poets I know who make a blank verse (a poem which does not rhyme) sound good
4Amy GreeneThis is really good! Thanks for liking my poem! it really means a lot to me. you are one of the only poets I know who make a blank verse (a poem which does not rhyme) sound good
12/28/2015 c1 7MagicInTheMundane
I've never thought about how similar the two are...
This really makes you think, and the writing is beautiful.
7MagicInTheMundaneI've never thought about how similar the two are...
This really makes you think, and the writing is beautiful.
12/28/2015 c1 11theweekendpoetry
Woah this is simply amazing. It was a great idea for comparing the two concepts and for elaborately bringing out the similarities.
11theweekendpoetryWoah this is simply amazing. It was a great idea for comparing the two concepts and for elaborately bringing out the similarities.
12/9/2015 c1 32favefangirl
Wow! This managed to both warm and break my heart at the same time! Sometimes, you can read a love poem and it is so clichéd that you feel the need to take to tumblr to rant, then other times you read them and feel as though the whole world has suddenly ended, yet begun as well. This is incredible, you should be so very proud of the beauty you created.
32favefangirlWow! This managed to both warm and break my heart at the same time! Sometimes, you can read a love poem and it is so clichéd that you feel the need to take to tumblr to rant, then other times you read them and feel as though the whole world has suddenly ended, yet begun as well. This is incredible, you should be so very proud of the beauty you created.
11/2/2015 c1 14letsdotheraindance
The poem is cohesive and easy to read. I like how you started out by describing both Love and Death as "a curious thing". :)
14letsdotheraindanceThe poem is cohesive and easy to read. I like how you started out by describing both Love and Death as "a curious thing". :)