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4/12/2016 c1 23Love A Mysterious Thing
Good paradigm going on here. I like it a lot.
3/11/2016 c1 46CorkyBookworm1
Why capitalize "death" and not "love"? Hmm, there were four lines in the middle that just took my break away, starting at "Love makes you cry." That is such a beautifully constructed thought.
3/10/2016 c1 4Amy Greene
This is really good! Thanks for liking my poem! it really means a lot to me. you are one of the only poets I know who make a blank verse (a poem which does not rhyme) sound good
3/8/2016 c1 481Katje Kaase
Good but use more similes and metaphors - be unique.
12/28/2015 c1 7MagicInTheMundane
I've never thought about how similar the two are...
This really makes you think, and the writing is beautiful.
12/28/2015 c1 11theweekendpoetry
Woah this is simply amazing. It was a great idea for comparing the two concepts and for elaborately bringing out the similarities.
12/9/2015 c1 32favefangirl
Wow! This managed to both warm and break my heart at the same time! Sometimes, you can read a love poem and it is so clich├ęd that you feel the need to take to tumblr to rant, then other times you read them and feel as though the whole world has suddenly ended, yet begun as well. This is incredible, you should be so very proud of the beauty you created.
11/2/2015 c1 14letsdotheraindance
The poem is cohesive and easy to read. I like how you started out by describing both Love and Death as "a curious thing". :)
11/1/2015 c1 12MTveit
Nice poem! I really liked the part where 'Love makes you cry/But Death has no tears left'' I like that Love and Death have capital letters here, almost as though they're being personified.
11/1/2015 c1 40Adria66
When Love and Death come together in whatever way, it sure feels like this. I like it :)

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