for DS7/15/2016 c1 Guest
Looking forward for the next chapter..Story line is really interesting..
Looking forward for the next chapter..Story line is really interesting..
7/15/2016 c1 
21WafflesandUnicorn
This sounds quite interesting. I'd like to see where this goes. I'm also curious as to why they can do what they do. Update soon, please?
21WafflesandUnicornThis sounds quite interesting. I'd like to see where this goes. I'm also curious as to why they can do what they do. Update soon, please?
12/11/2015 c1 Guest
OH MY GOSH! This first chapter was amazing. Everything was so descriptive and made sense. You created such an anxious and energetic tone. Ah it was great :D
OH MY GOSH! This first chapter was amazing. Everything was so descriptive and made sense. You created such an anxious and energetic tone. Ah it was great :D
11/4/2015 c3 2auroraglider
Oh, poor Evro, and that generous and courageous "Dying Star" from the past. I hope they find a way to save Evro.
I can't wait until the next chapter is posted, and the next and then, well, can you tell that I am hooked? Lol. Great writing!
2auroragliderOh, poor Evro, and that generous and courageous "Dying Star" from the past. I hope they find a way to save Evro.
I can't wait until the next chapter is posted, and the next and then, well, can you tell that I am hooked? Lol. Great writing!
11/4/2015 c2 auroraglider
OMG! I am loving this story. You have written your characters so well that I can picture each one in my mind as they speak. You also write in a way that makes it easy to follow the story even though it takes place in a different world than our own. Yes, yes, I am definitely enjoying this story of yours. Great writing!
OMG! I am loving this story. You have written your characters so well that I can picture each one in my mind as they speak. You also write in a way that makes it easy to follow the story even though it takes place in a different world than our own. Yes, yes, I am definitely enjoying this story of yours. Great writing!
11/1/2015 c1 auroraglider
This story starts out intriguing, then it becomes very exciting. I like your characters and am anxious to learn more about them.
This story starts out intriguing, then it becomes very exciting. I like your characters and am anxious to learn more about them.