for The Dance11/4/2015 c1 FK
Intriguing. Sexy. Spiky. Smart. Love it!
Intriguing. Sexy. Spiky. Smart. Love it!
11/4/2015 c1 
14letsdotheraindance
Your words flowed absolutely well. I liked the irregularity of poem's form because it made certain lines, specifically "And then slowly" and "Or hit so hard with exhilaration", jump out. The form also nicely fits the up-and-down rollercoaster of emotions that the speaker seems to revel in. Thanks for this interesting piece!
14letsdotheraindanceYour words flowed absolutely well. I liked the irregularity of poem's form because it made certain lines, specifically "And then slowly" and "Or hit so hard with exhilaration", jump out. The form also nicely fits the up-and-down rollercoaster of emotions that the speaker seems to revel in. Thanks for this interesting piece!