for Lost & Longing8/23/2016 c20 nikol
Overall I liked it but it needed editing.
The characters were great and easy to relate to. I also like that despite the introduction of other characters the focused remained with the main characters. Nicely done.
Overall I liked it but it needed editing.
The characters were great and easy to relate to. I also like that despite the introduction of other characters the focused remained with the main characters. Nicely done.
6/7/2016 c20 Francis
Lovely
Lovely
6/3/2016 c16 Puccapurple
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for updating the story. I'm dying to know what happens next. Seriously, I really love that story.
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you for updating the story. I'm dying to know what happens next. Seriously, I really love that story.
5/31/2016 c15 Puccapurple
Thank you author for the update. I honestly cannot wait to read what happens next.
Thank you author for the update. I honestly cannot wait to read what happens next.
5/2/2016 c14 Puccapurple
OMG 4 years later? He missed so much of that child's (or those children's?) life. Poor guy doesn't even know he's a father.
OMG 4 years later? He missed so much of that child's (or those children's?) life. Poor guy doesn't even know he's a father.
3/11/2016 c13 Emo.At.Heart
OMG! I hope he catches up to her to explain. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.
OMG! I hope he catches up to her to explain. Can't wait to read more. Update soon.