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5/16/2016 c1 8LorrahBear
What an interesting story! I really hope you continue; I am intrigued.

One suggestion: every once in a while it seems like there are perhaps a few too many commas. Maybe read the chapter outloud and ensure you need them all?

Nice job!

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