
11/20/2015 c1
21Marina x Machina
I think in the third to last line the grammar should be "what the gardener doesn't know is". Otherwise, yes, this was a very clever piece, good job! Pat yourself on the back.
-R

I think in the third to last line the grammar should be "what the gardener doesn't know is". Otherwise, yes, this was a very clever piece, good job! Pat yourself on the back.
-R