
10/1/2020 c2 Otakuami
So cute. it has this perfect amount of freshness and humour. Btw he can read minds right? I love how you revealed it to us in the second chapter without actually saying it. That's a great way to write. Omg I will never forget Allison. XD
So cute. it has this perfect amount of freshness and humour. Btw he can read minds right? I love how you revealed it to us in the second chapter without actually saying it. That's a great way to write. Omg I will never forget Allison. XD
4/26/2017 c3 DismissedStars
I'm soooo happy I found your story it's absolutely wonderful and adorable and I just ahhh it's so good. I've been looking for a story like this for awhile and it's perfect there isnt one but I didn't like. Bless your soul
I'm soooo happy I found your story it's absolutely wonderful and adorable and I just ahhh it's so good. I've been looking for a story like this for awhile and it's perfect there isnt one but I didn't like. Bless your soul
11/5/2016 c3 Guest
Beautiful, but I feel you rushed through it so...
Beautiful, but I feel you rushed through it so...
1/2/2016 c1 Bloodyrose125255
I'm internally screaming my head off right now as it is 3 am and waking up my parents is a big no-no but damn does this story tempt my self-control. This was one of the most adorkable things I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Allison was just such a cutie and though Sora was really chill, Allison–for me–won the competition hands down. Anyway, I hope you continue writing as this was also well-written!
I'm internally screaming my head off right now as it is 3 am and waking up my parents is a big no-no but damn does this story tempt my self-control. This was one of the most adorkable things I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Allison was just such a cutie and though Sora was really chill, Allison–for me–won the competition hands down. Anyway, I hope you continue writing as this was also well-written!
12/29/2015 c1
8DenimKitty
Just so you know, this is actually like one of my favourite one-shots ever and this comes from a girl who will read romance one-shots for like 4 hours straight. Love love love it! And the ending makes me laugh (although really I was smiling throughout like all of this).
Excited to read whatever else you write/have written _

Just so you know, this is actually like one of my favourite one-shots ever and this comes from a girl who will read romance one-shots for like 4 hours straight. Love love love it! And the ending makes me laugh (although really I was smiling throughout like all of this).
Excited to read whatever else you write/have written _
12/27/2015 c1
5TMSantos
"Dear God, Allison. Stop already."
Dear writer, send help, I'm drowning in feels!

"Dear God, Allison. Stop already."
Dear writer, send help, I'm drowning in feels!
12/3/2015 c1 Cherry
This is so beautiful. Like, this could be an manga and I would buy every copy for no good reason. This is so great. I like the cat. He's got a good taste in food.
This is so beautiful. Like, this could be an manga and I would buy every copy for no good reason. This is so great. I like the cat. He's got a good taste in food.
11/25/2015 c1 aesthetic umbrella
I thought you said "all of the paintings were gross" instead of gorgeous and I was like wut XDD
I thought you said "all of the paintings were gross" instead of gorgeous and I was like wut XDD
11/25/2015 c1 Ethempat
SO
FREAKING
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
CUTENESS
FLUFFINESS
OVERLOAD
YOU'VE BROKEN ME
ESPECIALLY AT THE END WHEN SOREN TRIES TO BE ALL POETIC AND NICE AND IS LIKE 'Forever and ever until I died." AND THEN ALLISON'S LIKE "YOU CAN'T DIE!"
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
SO
CUTE
SO
FREAKING
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
CUTENESS
FLUFFINESS
OVERLOAD
YOU'VE BROKEN ME
ESPECIALLY AT THE END WHEN SOREN TRIES TO BE ALL POETIC AND NICE AND IS LIKE 'Forever and ever until I died." AND THEN ALLISON'S LIKE "YOU CAN'T DIE!"
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH
SO
CUTE
11/25/2015 c1
3Da Kaleidoscope
1. I'm not happy. I was late for the bus because I was reading this story.
2. "Ear-pierced ears?" WUT IZ DIS?!
3. "...you see, this is what happened-" "No need to explain anything." There needs to be a new paragraph here. Different speakers.
4. What the frick are you doing up at 4:45?!

1. I'm not happy. I was late for the bus because I was reading this story.
2. "Ear-pierced ears?" WUT IZ DIS?!
3. "...you see, this is what happened-" "No need to explain anything." There needs to be a new paragraph here. Different speakers.
4. What the frick are you doing up at 4:45?!