for Thanking God
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368EWindheimA beautiful poem about God's gift to us. There's a lot of potential here that I feel you could really expand upon. Well done!
12/7/2015 c1 17abberly14It's a nice, simple poem that fits well anytime but is especially fitting giving the past holiday and the upcoming one.
for Thanking God
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