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1/8/2016 c1 8LorrahBear
A few small corrections: [someone] instead of "some one who loves..." As well as "To come down to us[,] / there would be no..." A comma instead of a period here is probably more correct.

Other than that, this flowed well and was well written. Well done.
1/3/2016 c1 7crazykumquat1123
Very nice!

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