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5/3/2021 c1 HeyCharles
You nailed it author, I was sucked right after reading the first few paragraphs. You know what, I suggest you join NovelStar's writing competition. A lot of readers will love your work.
4/21/2016 c1 4Brussels
Dude you should continue this story! I wanna see what happens next.
1/28/2016 c1 1Cheddar-Graham
RG EF Multi chp no. 1348 #4 of 4

I'm impressed by how complete this is, and you managed to do it all in less than 300 words. It captures a single moment, but under that moment is a whole story that the reader is free to interpret for himself. I like the variety of sentence structures - longer ones for the philosophical part, and short, terse ones to build up the tension. It helps to build up the overall mood towards the final thought-provoking question.

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