for trying to find out if I'm a plague like him1/11/2016 c1 
19pastryninja
I thought this was going to be about the usual lost love and then wham! I found out they killed the old lover! I like the emotions these two go through and the questions it brings up like why did they kill the other guy? why does the speaker remind her of him? I really like how the old lover still affects this couple even though he's dead. Such a weird love triangle!
19pastryninjaI thought this was going to be about the usual lost love and then wham! I found out they killed the old lover! I like the emotions these two go through and the questions it brings up like why did they kill the other guy? why does the speaker remind her of him? I really like how the old lover still affects this couple even though he's dead. Such a weird love triangle!
1/3/2016 c1 Cap
Nyyyce! Reminds me of a character I'm writing right now. THE FEELS
I've always been a happy-relationship kind of girl, but now that I'm testing the waters with sad relationships, I think I'm getting more into them. I love to torture my characters :)
Good poem Sky :) Oh and I'm going to read you on WattPad as soon as I find my login :P
CHeers,
Cap
Nyyyce! Reminds me of a character I'm writing right now. THE FEELS
I've always been a happy-relationship kind of girl, but now that I'm testing the waters with sad relationships, I think I'm getting more into them. I love to torture my characters :)
Good poem Sky :) Oh and I'm going to read you on WattPad as soon as I find my login :P
CHeers,
Cap
1/1/2016 c1 22The Beautiful Filth
This is absolutely breaking my heart Sky. The emotions are raw; unlike your livelier poems this one is gloomy and I feel the anguish flowing out of it. It is beautiful in its own right, and painfully so.
-Christie
22The Beautiful FilthThis is absolutely breaking my heart Sky. The emotions are raw; unlike your livelier poems this one is gloomy and I feel the anguish flowing out of it. It is beautiful in its own right, and painfully so.
-Christie