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5/17/2016 c17 Guest
Woah that's super dub, and I think a really good choice on your part, to remind us just how innocent Calix actually is. Also hot and well written at the same time!
5/17/2016 c17 1rAiNwAtEr1
You're fucking back, welcome! You have been missed! This chapter was hot as fuck, my mind has been blown. I honestly don't know what to say. Keep up the fantastic work and I look forward to reading more!
5/17/2016 c17 3KushyTales
Hnnnn, I know you've heard this before, but I seen the update and was like fuck yeah! The beautiful love making between Calix and Wyatt has been shaaared!

Ugh, I seriously cannot tell you enough how amazing this chapter is, you captured true love making. It is sweeter beyond words and continues, even through the third read, to be! 3

Why do you keep blowing my miiind Calico! xD

I am not looking forward to the plot progression thoooooo... unless you tell me there is more sweet love making after it xP OR, or during it! .
5/17/2016 c17 Keichaos
A smut-filled chapter, very reminiscent of THAT other story, Calico. Almost PWP but then I'm not complaining. It's actually one of your better written smuts in a long time. It's very unlike the sometimes speechless s3x scenes of HoaM or Fifty-Fifty, and feels like a throwback into your more verbal stories: Power Trip, etc. This is very, very well-written but very little to discuss in terms of plot, as you've pointed out.

I'll make sure to lessen my reviews now, or make them short since maybe I've upsetted you before with my reviews. But I have a duty as a fan so I'll be doing my reviews! :)
5/17/2016 c17 animegirl281
Finally! While I still love your other stories and characters, I have been wanting these two to get it on forever! I love how Calix took it like a champ too, that was HOT!
5/16/2016 c17 Lavi
Pure porn xD
Well, it was a very nice read anyway. And between just us- it's a known fact that the plot is just an excuse to write hot scenes, and I don't complain if you ask me ;]
5/16/2016 c17 9Safieri
Woo hoo! 6k words of porn! Squee! I've been enjoying your other stories but thank you thank you thank you for coming (teeheehee, coming) back to this one! Naughty Wyatt, "One more time..." Uh huh. The boy needs some rest!

That was well worth the wait! Looking forward to the next plot development after that lovely smut. Purrrrrrrrr.
5/14/2016 c1 Ssami
Is this one dead too? :((
5/6/2016 c16 Guest
please update its been so long
5/4/2016 c16 3Not Abigale
Aahhh! All of this is just aahh in a good way. I freaking love it! I do wonder though, how he knows he's been up in the mountains for 2 years since he let go of time, does he have a calendar or something? I was just wondering.
I love the progression of their relationship, it's a steady build and I can't wait to see the climax, no pun intended, or maybe there was, I'm not really sure.
5/1/2016 c16 Fundle
Gotta say this story is becoming my obsession. Seriously my heart literally leaps with joy every single time I see an update. All your story are pretty good but this one is defiantly my favorite.
It has that spark; that little something that sucks you in and make you crave more.
I think its amazing what you can do with little wording; taking the reader on an amazing emotional up down roller coster. I don't want it to end. Yet I know then end must come. I'm so exicted to see how you go from here.

Keep up the good work. More please
4/30/2016 c16 Guest
pls update I'll cry
4/26/2016 c6 YaoiLover
Aww this is so cute. I don't know why, I find this really cute. And Calix, I love him already! He's so adorable, Wyatt doesn't even know what hit him!
4/23/2016 c16 Guest
You know, the smut scenes are so hot.

Ahaha, I'm kidding, that's not the only thing i like.
Calix is so cute... So needy. So manipulative. I like that.

4/19/2016 c16 Guest
excited for chapter 17.
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