for Alpha3/22/2016 c14 UntamedImagination
So...I've been looking for a while...aaaaand I still haven't found an update. HURRY UP...I'm kidding...take your time...but seriously though...
So...I've been looking for a while...aaaaand I still haven't found an update. HURRY UP...I'm kidding...take your time...but seriously though...
3/21/2016 c14 Guest
it's been a while since the last update. it's making me somewhat nervous _;
it's been a while since the last update. it's making me somewhat nervous _;
3/20/2016 c8 
1Drowning Ninja
Yay I can't wait for them to get closer but I wonder why Wyatts acting so strange right now. Hmm...
1Drowning NinjaYay I can't wait for them to get closer but I wonder why Wyatts acting so strange right now. Hmm...
3/20/2016 c6 Drowning Ninja
I've never tried freeze dried icecream... Strange one you are but I'd be willing to try it. Also... I can't wait for Wyatt to dominate Calix! Yay!
I've never tried freeze dried icecream... Strange one you are but I'd be willing to try it. Also... I can't wait for Wyatt to dominate Calix! Yay!
3/20/2016 c5 Drowning Ninja
Oh my gosh yay! Katie I'm sorry haha I've been horrible for not reading and I've told you this but I am going to try and catch up in the next couple of days. Fire Emblem and Splatoon still control my life outside work D: love you!
Oh my gosh yay! Katie I'm sorry haha I've been horrible for not reading and I've told you this but I am going to try and catch up in the next couple of days. Fire Emblem and Splatoon still control my life outside work D: love you!
3/13/2016 c14 1linuen
So sorry for being absent on the 13th chapter but let me make it up to you. Finals is crazy, I have tons of schoolwork, and here I am... reading lemons. Don't worry! I'll get by just fine! Haha!
Anyways, I'm just going to point out some few highlights from 13th. Loving the dynamics between Calix and Canuck. I love dogs, and Canuck could be so adorable especially in recent chapters! Also, ehem, we get more hot scenes with Wyatt. I love his commanding and confident-seeming voice on teh sexeh tiems. Makes my feet curl. Too much feels, I guess. I have a weakness for bearded men with strong personalities. And the Dax issue, yes please, it would be a good plot progression if this gets explored very soon.
On to 14th! Princess! Sweetheart! Wow! We're moving faster than we've bargained for! And now, Calix's giving head just to keep Wyatt around. Can't say I blame him. That mountainman's charm and aura just... overwhelms you. And yes, it seems like borderline Stockholm Syndrome much but, hey, they did affect each other in ways they couldn't have dreamed of. I believe that Wyatt's hurting inside, just as Calix's, now that the "end" seems closer than ever. Sometimes, I wish the story just stays there, in the Rockies, but then we'd be stagnant. This plot progression seem to bring new interesting things and color me intrigued.
AND GOODBYE CALIX'S WATCH. His OCD in timekeeping is going haywire now. Especially if Wyatt keeps on distracting Calix in his grasp for time. Anyways, I will miss you, old friend. RIP Calix's watch (2016).
ALTHOUGH! Hurrah for hot springs cameo! Love it! 3
Now for the rating for Chapter 13: 8/10 for Calix/Canuck shipping and reopened wound regarding the alpha issue, which is one of the biggest issues of the story.
And for Chapter 14: I give this a 7.8/10. Slightly lower than 13 just because we're revolving around the Wyatt closing off from Calix again of an unknown issue. It's quite tiring in some rare moments, especially the needy Calix type (it kinda annoys me), but then again. I completely understand the context of the characters' internal process. I just wished Wyatt expressed MORE. I hate it when people get like that. Anyways, still, it's good reading all the same!
More, Calico! And stop playing Pokémon when you have writing to do! Haha!
1linuenSo sorry for being absent on the 13th chapter but let me make it up to you. Finals is crazy, I have tons of schoolwork, and here I am... reading lemons. Don't worry! I'll get by just fine! Haha!
Anyways, I'm just going to point out some few highlights from 13th. Loving the dynamics between Calix and Canuck. I love dogs, and Canuck could be so adorable especially in recent chapters! Also, ehem, we get more hot scenes with Wyatt. I love his commanding and confident-seeming voice on teh sexeh tiems. Makes my feet curl. Too much feels, I guess. I have a weakness for bearded men with strong personalities. And the Dax issue, yes please, it would be a good plot progression if this gets explored very soon.
On to 14th! Princess! Sweetheart! Wow! We're moving faster than we've bargained for! And now, Calix's giving head just to keep Wyatt around. Can't say I blame him. That mountainman's charm and aura just... overwhelms you. And yes, it seems like borderline Stockholm Syndrome much but, hey, they did affect each other in ways they couldn't have dreamed of. I believe that Wyatt's hurting inside, just as Calix's, now that the "end" seems closer than ever. Sometimes, I wish the story just stays there, in the Rockies, but then we'd be stagnant. This plot progression seem to bring new interesting things and color me intrigued.
AND GOODBYE CALIX'S WATCH. His OCD in timekeeping is going haywire now. Especially if Wyatt keeps on distracting Calix in his grasp for time. Anyways, I will miss you, old friend. RIP Calix's watch (2016).
ALTHOUGH! Hurrah for hot springs cameo! Love it! 3
Now for the rating for Chapter 13: 8/10 for Calix/Canuck shipping and reopened wound regarding the alpha issue, which is one of the biggest issues of the story.
And for Chapter 14: I give this a 7.8/10. Slightly lower than 13 just because we're revolving around the Wyatt closing off from Calix again of an unknown issue. It's quite tiring in some rare moments, especially the needy Calix type (it kinda annoys me), but then again. I completely understand the context of the characters' internal process. I just wished Wyatt expressed MORE. I hate it when people get like that. Anyways, still, it's good reading all the same!
More, Calico! And stop playing Pokémon when you have writing to do! Haha!
3/12/2016 c14 1rAiNwAtEr1
Honestly, my brain just short circuit. Fuckng hell that was hot! I actually like seeing Calix get one over on Wyatt, but he better be careful, push him too far and he's going to tear that ass up! I have a hunch that that's exactly what Wyatt really wants and poor innocent Calix has no idea that he is playing with fire! Canuck is too fucking awesome, I want to steal him away. How you manage to frequently update this awesome story alludes me, but I so damn happy you do. As always, keep up the awesome fucking work!
You're biggest stalker...err...fan lol
Justina aka rainwater
1rAiNwAtEr1Honestly, my brain just short circuit. Fuckng hell that was hot! I actually like seeing Calix get one over on Wyatt, but he better be careful, push him too far and he's going to tear that ass up! I have a hunch that that's exactly what Wyatt really wants and poor innocent Calix has no idea that he is playing with fire! Canuck is too fucking awesome, I want to steal him away. How you manage to frequently update this awesome story alludes me, but I so damn happy you do. As always, keep up the awesome fucking work!
You're biggest stalker...err...fan lol
Justina aka rainwater
3/12/2016 c14 9Safieri
That was an excellent use for your mouth, Calix. You might be up for that Blow Job of the Year Award after all! Then again I'm still hoping Ashton over at Fifty Fifty might be a contender too...just saying I think he'd give good head too!
OMG...now I'm picturing Calix and Wyatt versus Ashton and Hoadley in a BJ contest. Who can get their guy off first?! Winner takes all! *nosebleed* I think I need to lay down...feeling faint from blood loss...
Honestly though, love the chapter!
9SafieriThat was an excellent use for your mouth, Calix. You might be up for that Blow Job of the Year Award after all! Then again I'm still hoping Ashton over at Fifty Fifty might be a contender too...just saying I think he'd give good head too!
OMG...now I'm picturing Calix and Wyatt versus Ashton and Hoadley in a BJ contest. Who can get their guy off first?! Winner takes all! *nosebleed* I think I need to lay down...feeling faint from blood loss...
Honestly though, love the chapter!
3/12/2016 c14 Guest
Baby got Stockholm so bad. It's fascinating. I'm dying to see how they respond to paradise being interrupted, as it surely will be at some point. Cannuck is gorgeous and they should both cuddle him!
Baby got Stockholm so bad. It's fascinating. I'm dying to see how they respond to paradise being interrupted, as it surely will be at some point. Cannuck is gorgeous and they should both cuddle him!
3/12/2016 c14 kimmiet0310
So hot.
Needy Calix is fantastic. He's so adorable. I don't blame Wyatt for not being able to resist him. : )
Thanks for another great update.
Can't wait to see/read what's gonna happen next.
So hot.
Needy Calix is fantastic. He's so adorable. I don't blame Wyatt for not being able to resist him. : )
Thanks for another great update.
Can't wait to see/read what's gonna happen next.
3/11/2016 c13 3UnderTheGrave
Another great chapter! They keep getting hotter than the last omg
Heh. Really... Who is Dax again...? Lol kidding. The smut is just too good to worry about anything else.
I'm actually really excited and kind of antsy to see how you plan on closing this story. I'm trying to stay positive, because I like the undeniable thing these two have towards each other, but I don't want poor Canuck to be left all alone! :C Ahhhh I love Canuck more than I thought I would. I hope all three of their relationships with one another can even out even more, because they're all so cute when they all get along!
3UnderTheGraveAnother great chapter! They keep getting hotter than the last omg
Heh. Really... Who is Dax again...? Lol kidding. The smut is just too good to worry about anything else.
I'm actually really excited and kind of antsy to see how you plan on closing this story. I'm trying to stay positive, because I like the undeniable thing these two have towards each other, but I don't want poor Canuck to be left all alone! :C Ahhhh I love Canuck more than I thought I would. I hope all three of their relationships with one another can even out even more, because they're all so cute when they all get along!
3/11/2016 c13 Guest
I would love to know what Wyatt's POV is, but I also love the mystery of not completely knowing and having to interpret what he's thinking from Calix's perspective.
I would love to know what Wyatt's POV is, but I also love the mystery of not completely knowing and having to interpret what he's thinking from Calix's perspective.
3/8/2016 c13 9Safieri
*purrrrrrrrr* Come home from work to this. It's a good day!
Dax who? It's like Calix says. There's only Wyatt and Not Wyatt. I agree that the Not Wyatt's aren't our top priority right now. Eeheeheehee! There's a lovely plot here too but I've been saving my tequila for the lemons. Time to take a shot!
9Safieri*purrrrrrrrr* Come home from work to this. It's a good day!
Dax who? It's like Calix says. There's only Wyatt and Not Wyatt. I agree that the Not Wyatt's aren't our top priority right now. Eeheeheehee! There's a lovely plot here too but I've been saving my tequila for the lemons. Time to take a shot!