for Alpha3/8/2016 c13 kimmiet0310
I was so excited when I saw that you updated. I couldn't wait to read this chapter and, as always, you didn't disappoint.
Calix and Wyatt are ssooo hot together. I love them so much.
But I admit my love for Canuck is almost equal to my love for Calix and Wyatt.
And this chapter I really did forget about Dax until Calix talked about not caring about anyone who wasn't Wyatt. Then I was like, wait..what about Dax?
Thank you for the update and I can't wait for the next. : )
I was so excited when I saw that you updated. I couldn't wait to read this chapter and, as always, you didn't disappoint.
Calix and Wyatt are ssooo hot together. I love them so much.
But I admit my love for Canuck is almost equal to my love for Calix and Wyatt.
And this chapter I really did forget about Dax until Calix talked about not caring about anyone who wasn't Wyatt. Then I was like, wait..what about Dax?
Thank you for the update and I can't wait for the next. : )
3/8/2016 c13 Guest
Canuck just became my favourite. I want to see Calix and Canuck cuddles all day.
Canuck just became my favourite. I want to see Calix and Canuck cuddles all day.
3/8/2016 c13 
4kawaii-kitsune-thief
Omg _ I was trying to get fiction press to work on my phone (it hates it) for THIS story specifically, then it went down on my computer and I thought I broke it and I was like _ "I'm going to have to pull out my old PC to read Alpha." Sooooooo... Thanks for THAT addiction pal. oxo Ah... Love this story. Thanks for the update!
4kawaii-kitsune-thiefOmg _ I was trying to get fiction press to work on my phone (it hates it) for THIS story specifically, then it went down on my computer and I thought I broke it and I was like _ "I'm going to have to pull out my old PC to read Alpha." Sooooooo... Thanks for THAT addiction pal. oxo Ah... Love this story. Thanks for the update!
3/8/2016 c13 1rAiNwAtEr1
Hot damn, I have one hell of a nose bleed. Jesus, if I'm this worked up over a little humping scene I can only imagine when they finally fuck. And Canuck, God I love him so damn much. As always he stole the damn show! Another brilliant chapter added, and being the needy reader I am, I'm begging for more!
1rAiNwAtEr1Hot damn, I have one hell of a nose bleed. Jesus, if I'm this worked up over a little humping scene I can only imagine when they finally fuck. And Canuck, God I love him so damn much. As always he stole the damn show! Another brilliant chapter added, and being the needy reader I am, I'm begging for more!
3/8/2016 c13 Jaklah
Christ... oops sorry still fantasizing. xP ahhhh Trayce always making the readers completely enthralled in your stories, this story may even be on par with Intrusive and Arrogant! And thats saying something because it's been my favorite for years. Keep up the wonderful work looking forward and dying in suspense dor the next chapter 3.
Christ... oops sorry still fantasizing. xP ahhhh Trayce always making the readers completely enthralled in your stories, this story may even be on par with Intrusive and Arrogant! And thats saying something because it's been my favorite for years. Keep up the wonderful work looking forward and dying in suspense dor the next chapter 3.
3/8/2016 c13 UntamedImagination
I don't like Dax at the moment because I feel as though he left Calix alone on purpose.
I don't like Dax at the moment because I feel as though he left Calix alone on purpose.
3/8/2016 c12 3UnderTheGrave
Ahhhh this is so good. I was meaning to go to bed, and I saw this and just couldn't NOT click it. It reeled me in even more after the first chapter. I am totally HOOKED.
You write the chemistry between these two characters so well, I think you've got all us readers SCREAMING FOR THEM TO BANG ALREADY. Or maybe it's just me? w It has to be my favorite part. Just- They're so hot together. The tension you create is marvelous. **
Hope to see an update soon, but take all the time you need to make it perfect. I'll just be over here biting my nails eagerly~
3UnderTheGraveAhhhh this is so good. I was meaning to go to bed, and I saw this and just couldn't NOT click it. It reeled me in even more after the first chapter. I am totally HOOKED.
You write the chemistry between these two characters so well, I think you've got all us readers SCREAMING FOR THEM TO BANG ALREADY. Or maybe it's just me? w It has to be my favorite part. Just- They're so hot together. The tension you create is marvelous. **
Hope to see an update soon, but take all the time you need to make it perfect. I'll just be over here biting my nails eagerly~
3/5/2016 c12 1linuen
Chapter 12's "Kissing and Confessions"! Well, that was a cute chapter, a little bit tamed on this installment are you, Calico? Still, so sorry took this long time to make a review.
Let's see. Aha! Finally! Some chunky plot progression! I was beginning to worry that you have been focusing on character development way too much. Also, I may not want for Calix to leave Wyatt's stuffy cabin, but it's the only logical development of the plot, isn't it? He has to be treated and they'll be separated... Forever. ;(
At least we get some steamy sex scenes. I think you skimmed this over. You're distracted, Calico. It's way toned down than your good smut scenes. I think you did this on purpose! You did, didn't you?! Keeping us hanging waiting for more! Hah! I SEE YOU.
And yes, Wyatt teddy bear. Hmmm. So dreamy. And adorable!
Excellent return to story with a hot scene (toned down version than Calico-usual), I give this chapter 8/10!
1linuenChapter 12's "Kissing and Confessions"! Well, that was a cute chapter, a little bit tamed on this installment are you, Calico? Still, so sorry took this long time to make a review.
Let's see. Aha! Finally! Some chunky plot progression! I was beginning to worry that you have been focusing on character development way too much. Also, I may not want for Calix to leave Wyatt's stuffy cabin, but it's the only logical development of the plot, isn't it? He has to be treated and they'll be separated... Forever. ;(
At least we get some steamy sex scenes. I think you skimmed this over. You're distracted, Calico. It's way toned down than your good smut scenes. I think you did this on purpose! You did, didn't you?! Keeping us hanging waiting for more! Hah! I SEE YOU.
And yes, Wyatt teddy bear. Hmmm. So dreamy. And adorable!
Excellent return to story with a hot scene (toned down version than Calico-usual), I give this chapter 8/10!
3/1/2016 c12 lee
Wow man its really cute... I mean the story... Andin a span of two days? Theres a lot of things happened already that so intriguing? and this one is so hoooooootttttttt... lol.
12 chapters already but 2 days? that's awesome... you are really good in story telling.. and I admire you for that. And guess what? i thought there will be a sex scene here but since none, I wish it will be in next chapter! and please make it a hardcore...lol I mean... BDSM type since wyatt is an Alpha and Calix is his bitch... you know rough SE* WOW... can't wait... looking forward for it...
and lastly...you updates really fast and that makes me like it more (your story).
And wish you good health always so you will never abandon this.
Good luck!
Wow man its really cute... I mean the story... Andin a span of two days? Theres a lot of things happened already that so intriguing? and this one is so hoooooootttttttt... lol.
12 chapters already but 2 days? that's awesome... you are really good in story telling.. and I admire you for that. And guess what? i thought there will be a sex scene here but since none, I wish it will be in next chapter! and please make it a hardcore...lol I mean... BDSM type since wyatt is an Alpha and Calix is his bitch... you know rough SE* WOW... can't wait... looking forward for it...
and lastly...you updates really fast and that makes me like it more (your story).
And wish you good health always so you will never abandon this.
Good luck!
3/1/2016 c12 2JBFanatic
Liking this chapter a whole lot lol so much hot action, I can barely stand it.
Honestly, I think Wyatt is adorable. He's such a big teddy bear when it comes to Calix, even if he does get harsh with him. His confession was really cute. He reminded me of a kid telling someone how much they like them and how everything about them is cute, especially when he tells Calix how "super soft" he is lol I just love it. Apparently he's a really good kisser too, if Calix's want to do it so much is anything to go by lol I swear, it feels like they've been together forever. That's a serious connection.
The thought of it ending gives me the sniffles. I don't want Calix to go, but I also don't want him to stay in the woods with his leg like that. Geez, how is this going to turn out? How will they function without one another after bonding so quickly and tightly? I'm looking forward to seeing how this ends, though I really don't want it to...le sigh.
Anywho, another great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
2JBFanaticLiking this chapter a whole lot lol so much hot action, I can barely stand it.
Honestly, I think Wyatt is adorable. He's such a big teddy bear when it comes to Calix, even if he does get harsh with him. His confession was really cute. He reminded me of a kid telling someone how much they like them and how everything about them is cute, especially when he tells Calix how "super soft" he is lol I just love it. Apparently he's a really good kisser too, if Calix's want to do it so much is anything to go by lol I swear, it feels like they've been together forever. That's a serious connection.
The thought of it ending gives me the sniffles. I don't want Calix to go, but I also don't want him to stay in the woods with his leg like that. Geez, how is this going to turn out? How will they function without one another after bonding so quickly and tightly? I'm looking forward to seeing how this ends, though I really don't want it to...le sigh.
Anywho, another great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
2/29/2016 c12 Guest
Thank you for updating so frequently. I'm starting to check a lot nowadays. This is now way out of hand, in a hot way of course, but Calix definitely seems to know what he wants. He's so innocent in most ways, but there was nothing innocent about this. Wyatt wouldn't have gone through with it if Calix hadn't pushed. Can't wait for more. I really want more Calix and Canuck cuddles too!
Thank you for updating so frequently. I'm starting to check a lot nowadays. This is now way out of hand, in a hot way of course, but Calix definitely seems to know what he wants. He's so innocent in most ways, but there was nothing innocent about this. Wyatt wouldn't have gone through with it if Calix hadn't pushed. Can't wait for more. I really want more Calix and Canuck cuddles too!
2/29/2016 c12 kimmiet0310
I was so excited when I saw you updated, I could hardly wait to read this chapter. I absolutely love Calix and Wyatt. The way Wyatt "handles" Calix is amazing.
I'm really curious about Dax, but I have a bad feeling about him. I hope I'm wrong though.
Just have to add, I love all your stories. You're an amazing writer. Definitely one of my favorites.
Can't wait for the next update.
I was so excited when I saw you updated, I could hardly wait to read this chapter. I absolutely love Calix and Wyatt. The way Wyatt "handles" Calix is amazing.
I'm really curious about Dax, but I have a bad feeling about him. I hope I'm wrong though.
Just have to add, I love all your stories. You're an amazing writer. Definitely one of my favorites.
Can't wait for the next update.