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2/29/2016 c12 9Safieri
If you review it...Calico will write...
Okay. That was hot. *steams* Seems like Wyatt's having to remind both of them of the plan. Squee! Smut then plot! I love it!

As hot as these two getting it on is, I REALLY want to know what happened with Dax! Did he abandon his brother alone on a mountain to die? Did he get hurt and was unable to go back for him? Was he found by a lonely mountain man while be chased by a bear? Oh, wait. That's Calix.

Your updates always make my day! Thank you! And now I shall go back to rereading your other stories. Binged on Fifty Fifty. Maybe I should go back to HoaM or Tails of Atticus...hmmm...
2/29/2016 c12 1rAiNwAtEr1
Omg, this chapter had me wetting my Sunday dress! Honestly though, what amazing chemistry these two have. This chapter was definitely a treat! All I kept thinking was, "Silly Calix, what Wyatt really wants to do is fuck you so hard you'll never forget who is in charge!" I love how Calix is slowly getting under Wyatts skin, hell even Canuck is slowly being won over. Perhaps the bitch has more power than the alpha; after all, a wolf pack is usually ran by a bitch lol. God help me I perved so hard on this chapter! Keep up the awesome updates! Feed my addiction!
2/29/2016 c12 Lucyan
Ahh that was so sweet and fluffy.
Whiney needy Calix is he best
And then there's affectionate Wyatt
Boy, I die
2/26/2016 c11 4kawaii-kitsune-thief
I'm waiting for him to throw that watch out of the window XD This story is really engrossing! I can't wait for more!
2/26/2016 c11 Broken
I have been sidetracked from my diet regime and have resorted to eating Jack due to these last three stressful days. Where's the update?
2/25/2016 c11 2JBFanatic
Calix kissed him! *breaks into a happy dance* It's been a long time coming lol but who knows how Wyatt is going to react. God, why don't they just date already? They act like a couple and they get each other hot and bothered. Might as well lol no more trying to write off the night before as a mistake. It was not a mistake; it was sexy and beautiful lol

Happy times with Canuck, no matter how brief. I love it. I'm not really sure why Wyatt is against them playing, but I think it's great. Is Canuck only supposed to play with the Alpha? Wyatt doesn't want Canuck to be submissive to Calix? Eh, well, I guess I'll find out later.

So we had ourselves another blowout, probably the best one yet. Idk, I guess I just love to see Calix be sassy and argue back. I'm actually quite proud of him for lasting that long without running back to Wyatt no matter how bad he wanted to. He wasn't even the first to give in. He's the winner in my book, not that that's what it's about...But it was just good to see he could go a little bit of time without being attached to Wyatt's hip yearning for his love and acceptance even if it does suck. Yay, Calix!

I think it's about time for Wyatt to let his alpha all the way out and make Calix his for real once and for all. Wyatt, the boy turns you on, that's completely fine. Embrace it, indulge in it. It's okay. Calix is starting to embrace it; learn from him...lol says the fan girl who just wants to see those two make out for days.

Side note: Was I the only who laughed when Calix wondered if Wyatt was going to string him up next to that deer? Lol it was hilarious, probably because I had the funniest image in my head when I pictured it.

Anyway, another great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
2/24/2016 c11 LaileyxX
"Stop fucking with me"
More like stop fucking me 'cause I'm supposed to be fucking you eyooo. XD Anyways, I was so glad you didn't let Calix give in on giving Wyatt the cold shoulder. I was just screaming at my monitor "Don't give in! Don't do it!". I love the dynamic between these two fuckers, both amazing to each their own.
2/24/2016 c11 Guest
I could never complain about a chapter as perfect as that. It's made me cry, it's so well done. I adore Calix, and although he's a damsel in distress and that's a very cute and fun dynamic to play about with, I love his stubborness. I love that he's not meekly doing everything Wyatt says, I love that he had the strength to hold out all that time alone. He feels like a person, not a plot point, and that's amazing. Wyatt is fascinating, and deeply human, and Canuck is beyond interesting.
2/24/2016 c11 1linuen
Chapter 11! Finally! I like how the title of the chapter pertains to literal and metaphorical settings in the story. It's very catchy.

I liked the hot spring scenario. It seemed like the scene was a mixture of awkwardness and sensuality, which I found really funny, especially with the whole "I had sex with you last night". The silence they did to each other was very life-like. However, I am not fond with Calix's outburst; it seemed to me like it's a repetitive process and theme through the story which I find a bit wearing thin. Calix has to set his mind about some issues with Wyatt.

Nonetheless, the time-skipping scenario was made apparent once again, which I find very entertaining as usual. Although, I couldn't stomach the no eating for the whole day thing. See what I did there? Hahaha! Okay, I'll show my way out now.

Or not. I liked Calix's line of how he "didn't mean it." Very thoughtful and sincere-seeming. Almost sweet. You go, Calix! Kiss that hot mess of a Wyatt!

I rate this chapter a 7/10. Could use more new themes but the new setting gives the narrative a breath of fresh air. See that again? No? Okay. Haha!
2/24/2016 c11 1rAiNwAtEr1
This chapter, oddly enough, felt even more sensual than the last. I feel like both their bodies are getting to know each other. With Wyatt's last words, all I kept thinking he meant was that he probably couldn't stop thinking about how much he really wanted to fuck Calix lol. I'm loving the longer chapter length too! It kind of felt like two in one. Keep up the great work!
2/24/2016 c11 animegirl281
*le sigh* I love these two! You and your brain and your fingers are a blessing! Give me moar!
2/24/2016 c11 Krlsen
:)
2/23/2016 c11 linlinmono
It's so nice waking up to another one of your chapters. Makes my long loooong week a lot better. Thank you!
2/23/2016 c11 Guest
with each chapter the story gets more exciting and awesome to read,hats off to you for that:)
2/23/2016 c11 UntamedImagination
The next chapter should REALLY REALLY be in Wyatt's POV. Make things a little more interesting.
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