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2/9/2016 c8 1rAiNwAtEr1
I'm glad Waytt voiced his thoughts more clearly on Dex, because they are the same thoughts that have been bumping in my head. Poor Canuck! Broke my heart to see him put on punishment. I like the new development between Calix and Waytt. Keep the chapters coming!
2/9/2016 c8 animegirl281
The brother mystery is starting to get to me. I really need some steamy mountain man lovin' to take my mind off of it :D
2/7/2016 c7 Krlsen
2/7/2016 c7 ougley
I love it :)
2/6/2016 c7 rAiNwAtEr1
Poor Canuck! To be honest I feel devastated on the wolfs behalf more so than Calix lol. Gosh, my priorities are out of whack lol. Another great chapter, I love the growing dynamics between these characters. More please!
2/6/2016 c4 1Drowning Ninja
Ahhhhh xD I loved it and I can't wait to read more. You've updated so much that I'm still so far behind. Anyways love ya!
2/6/2016 c7 6Adored
Love the chapter! Poor Calix and Canuck lol
2/6/2016 c7 Keichaos
So! We got our first action on the 7th chapter! A bit late than your usual writing, Calico, but hey, it's a fun ride all the same. I think it's good writing, a bit more essence than the usual romantic stories here in FP, and making the readers think and feel things. Things are getting good!

Your in-character writing is getting good! The reactions are believable! Since I'm a guy, I know what Calix is feeling. It's overwhelming, embarassing, but it doesn't make it any less real. I gotta tell you, when a guy's turned on - be it straight or not - something's gotta happen. But then again, when we get snapped back into reality, with the shame creeping in, it's going to be a hard sell. I think this is what happened to Wyatt, assuming of course, since it's so obvious he was getting deeper than he planned to with the licking thing. I wonder what goes in his head while cooking? I bet NASTY stuff. Hahaha! I LOVE IT!

Special mention to Canuck, also, for the excellent acting. His reactions to the whole thing is like a mirror of the viewers. "Nope, not buying that, unless you do something better," we fans (and Canuck) say. I'm feeling this alpha thing is not over but maybe that's just me.

I give this a 9/10 because... whew. That was one fun ride!
2/6/2016 c6 Keichaos
I love the movement of Chapter 6! I find myself immersed in the world of Alpha as more details are revealed of the characters' thoughts in this tiny little space they're all huddled in together. I think you've made an amazing job at producing conflicts and tensions between the characters (even the unspeaking Canuck).

So to the nitpicking of details: I love how you made the semi-timeskip thing you did with Calix and his commentaries. It felt like Power Trip all over again. Of course, we've got the Alpha challenging arc, with Calix as the causative agent of conflict, very smart plot progression, fun and interesting. I see the future development with this and my imagination is running wild! I just didn't realize that Calix could be mistaken for a "bitch" aside from all his crying indicating his feminine side. To be fair, he wasn't really described as much (unless he had been and I forgot; so sorry, Calico). The dried ice cream... I'm from a tropic country so I have NO idea what that is. Sounds delicious though.

I give this chapter a 9/10 for well-balanced character progressions and plot developments!
2/5/2016 c7 Guest
Aw I feel kind of bad for Canuck too! I understand Wyatt's logic, but poor sweet Calix doesn't deserve that torment, he's so adorable!
2/5/2016 c7 9Safieri
Sorry, Wyatt. I don't think it worked. You, uh. Need to do that again. ...naked...with more licking. Might I suggest going lower? *squee*

Seriously though, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
2/5/2016 c7 Yandere-Chan
Holy crap this chapters. That was INTENSe, ahhh but I kind of feel bad FOR Canuck, damn that Wyatt is a lil bit unstable but hooray FOR the sexy times. Thanks FOR updating so fast :)
2/5/2016 c7 Guest
Love the story! Always looking forward to the next one!
2/4/2016 c7 Guest
Aaaaaaahhhh...you updated,thank you so this story.
2/4/2016 c7 2JBFanatic
I vote for a second round of domination. All those in favor... lol.

So that was really entertaining. The funniest part was all that fake mounting, Calix having to listen to the bed creak while Wyatt did his thing-which was probably the most embarrassing thing ever-and then Canuck not even caring lol. He was bored lol best thing in the world.

Ooh, and then the whole licking of the neck. Don't think I would complain as much as Calix did, but then again I am a female and would have no problem whatsoever letting that alpha male dominate me lol. And seems to me like Calix wasn't the only one who started enjoying it *wink* *wink* Wyatt forgot where he was for a minute, didn't he? Lol those primal desires kicking back in just for a second.

I must say, I would've been a little put out by how quickly Wyatt snapped back into his alpha mode after that little moment despite that being the whole point of the exercise. But I am glad everything has been dealt with between Wyatt and Canuck. Funny how I mentioned in my last review that Calix came in and rocked the boat, and then Wyatt basically said the same thing lol. Although, to be fair to Calix, it's not like he just showed up at Wyatt's door all willy nilly. Wyatt was the one who brought him in, so all the blame can't be placed at Calix's feet.

Another great chapter, can't wait for the next!
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