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1/8/2016 c1 Janie
OMG I truly love this first chapter and can't wait to read the next.
1/8/2016 c1 Obsidionyx
Off to a good start; I'm feeling a powerful urge to throttle Daxton, though. How could he leave his little brother in the middle of nowhere like that? Please post again soon. I want to hear his explanation at some point. Keep up the excellent work. :)
1/7/2016 c1 Guest
Hngggh, does this mean youre updating regularly? *BLINK WIDE INNOCENT PLEADING EYES PUSS IN BOOTS STYLE* You are right?
1/6/2016 c1 9Safieri
Rabble rabble rabble rabble rabble! *sharpens pitchfork*
Just kidding ;) I'm liking it so far. Still keeping the pitchfork handy but I agree that you have to write what you're excited about.
1/6/2016 c1 2JBFanatic
I did in fact have my pitchfork sharpened and ready to go, but I think I've lost my rioting spirit. Instead, I'm quite looking forward to the continuation of this story.

Now, first, let me say something about Calix: who in their right mind would leave their campsite in the middle of the forest without any type of survival gear when it's getting dark out? Calix would, which makes me believe he's about as crazy as he thinks Wyatt is. He was concerned about his brother, understandable, but I don't think getting lost in the forest is going to help him find Dax. Of course, I could be wrong.

I can't be too mad, though, because if he didn't lost, he wouldn't have gotten rescued by the big mountain man. Is it strange that I already kinda have a crush on Wyatt? I don't know, maybe it's because I went to school in the mountains and I find mountain men dreamy. Either way, I'm a fan. Also, it doesn't hurt that he's the alpha of his little wolf pack. I only wonder now how long these two are going to be together and just what's going to transpire between them. My curiosity is officially peeked.

Looking forward to the next update!
1/6/2016 c1 Amora Belfree
Okay, I'm intrigued but I'm dying for more Fifty-Fifty. I'm very intrigued, but I want more Fifty-Fifty. Please?
1/6/2016 c1 bonky jo
Not going to lie, when I saw an update from you I was expecting fifty-fifty or gavin's story. But this was a pleasant surprise. Definitely a good start; can't wait for more.
1/6/2016 c1 FreakLovesKink
Great beginning!
Keep on going, and I'm definitely sticking around to see where it goes.
*secretly hopes Dax is ok while waiting for Wyatt's story*
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