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6/23/2016 c21 Kimmie
Aaaaiiii. No. I love it. Lol.
Great chapter but I can not wait for the next one.
Thank you for the update. : )
6/23/2016 c21 9Safieri
The sweet torture of a cliffhanger. Squirming, while wild imaginings of what will happen next fly about my brain! Calix is starting to crack under the pressure but he really needs to talk to someone. This phone call with Wyatt could go so many ways! Gah! *Squirm squirm squirm*
6/23/2016 c21 animegirl281
ARGUHHHHH! *throws chair* stupid cliffhangers!
6/23/2016 c21 1Saint Wilde
How dare you lol! Really!? I have a personal attachment to all of these characters and you just use them to throw me around. This story is beautiful and you are one of the absolutely most capable writers I've ever encountered. I've read some of your older works and you've always dealt with dubious content, but I will say that (and not saying the others aren't) this is definitely the most sophisticated and artful of your works and these characters feel like they breathe right off the words. I'm in love.
6/19/2016 c19 UnderTheGrave
My heart omf. When they started talking about their cabin together... and its kinda bittersweet but Im glad Canuck went back to follow his instincts. I couldnt stand to have him shut up in a pin somewhere. :'(

Your author's note at the end made me make a pained sound out loud and I even knew there was another chapter.
6/19/2016 c17 3UnderTheGrave
You, dear author, are an idol for smut writers everywhere. That sounds really cheesy but it's true. Your smut sections are my favorites and you have great plots on top of it too. I think this is my favorite chapter so far... I wonder why. Lol

And I am glad to see these updates! Thank you!
6/19/2016 c16 1Drowning Ninja
Ah! Wyatt I know you love Calix! Eeeee yay I think I know what coming in the next chapter! Ooo lala and I'm reading this while out at my trailer... I can imagine it even better.
6/15/2016 c20 1rAiNwAtEr1
WOW, I feel like this story has put me into a cold bath only to shove me into a stove. Gosh, I simply feel too much. I hurt for Calix again. I hurt for Wyatt and wonder where he is. I feel satisfied in knowing what happen to Dax. Bottom line, I need more!
6/13/2016 c20 Celestialuna
Good chapter.
6/11/2016 c20 Krlsen
6/10/2016 c20 Guest
So happy to know what exactly had happened to Dax, I can't wait to see how the story develops and he and Wyatt reunites
6/10/2016 c20 3KushyTales
Awww, I loves this story! It's so amazing and emotional, you get so caught up in the ups and downs of the characters. It's just too great to really put into words!

Ah, thanks so much for the amazing adventure so far! Keep it coming!


6/9/2016 c20 Guest
6/9/2016 c20 Guest
Ooh I loved this. It was so good to see Calix get the clock times back in too. I love how he's feeling with perspective, and I love that it seems Dax isn't who we thought he was. Can't wait to see what happens next.
6/9/2016 c20 1linuen
I have to officially stop rating now because the last few chapters are going for a ride on the feels trip. Or sort of. Anyways, real exciting stuff happening!

I like the train of thought in this chapter, unusually coherent and sharp; I've never been to an ER in recent years so I wouldn't know how sharp a doped up mind could be. It looks and sounds confusing though, everything seems like chaotic. Anyways, in Calix's case, everyone should be frantic; being a missing person, his discovery is a miracle! I could sympathize with his parents, but not so much on Dax. I get the writing, I do, since Calix has been pretty upright about it in his thoughts. I just... thought that Dax had this more sinister plot going on. My mind was just so ready to butcher him for leaving Calix behind and so distraught for majority of the story.

Special mention to Nurse Hill, who I noticed to be unusually well-described. A good experience with a pleasant nurse in the ER, Calico? Haha! I see you. And I warmed up to that beardless, tall nurse.

Great chapter! And thank you for the fitting climax updates! I would leave a comment on Wattpad, too, but I always made my reviews here in FP ever since PT so... I'm a bit of a loyalist, anyway. Hoping for some content soon, Calico! Kudos!
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