for Electron and the Atom1/10/2016 c1 
4our-embossed-sky
Nice! Very interesting how you made characters out of them science stuff :) Bit confusing about the electron (what happened to him?) but otherwise, very very unique!
4our-embossed-skyNice! Very interesting how you made characters out of them science stuff :) Bit confusing about the electron (what happened to him?) but otherwise, very very unique!
1/8/2016 c1 AgentDolly
Too lazy to log in, but I really love it.
Too lazy to log in, but I really love it.
1/7/2016 c1 11Myst Marshall
Aww, thanks for the awesome science lesson! I'll be remembering this story when I take my test in Chemistry about atoms. :)
Short and sweet one shot! It was really good...I believe opposites do attract!
Thanks for sharing this piece with all of us. I really enjoyed it. :)
-MM
11Myst MarshallAww, thanks for the awesome science lesson! I'll be remembering this story when I take my test in Chemistry about atoms. :)
Short and sweet one shot! It was really good...I believe opposites do attract!
Thanks for sharing this piece with all of us. I really enjoyed it. :)
-MM
1/7/2016 c1 8LorrahBear
I love how you took such a tiny world and made it large, then added personification. Well written and enjoyable.
8LorrahBearI love how you took such a tiny world and made it large, then added personification. Well written and enjoyable.
1/7/2016 c1 7pzadcat
amazing. last unit in chemistry was about protons, electrons, and neutrons. i absolutely love this and u have a nice writing style. hope to see more from you ;)
7pzadcatamazing. last unit in chemistry was about protons, electrons, and neutrons. i absolutely love this and u have a nice writing style. hope to see more from you ;)
1/7/2016 c1 6Victoria Best
I really like this :D I love your writing style - smooth, crisp and clear, all flowing nicely, with just the right amount of describing. Also, I think you've got a powerful message here about opposites :) Great job!
6Victoria BestI really like this :D I love your writing style - smooth, crisp and clear, all flowing nicely, with just the right amount of describing. Also, I think you've got a powerful message here about opposites :) Great job!
1/6/2016 c1 4SnowflakeSoup
oooh this is quite interesting
and HAPPY NEW YEAR PRECINCT :DDDDDDD
how're your other things coming along?
4SnowflakeSoupoooh this is quite interesting
and HAPPY NEW YEAR PRECINCT :DDDDDDD
how're your other things coming along?