
1/29/2016 c1
22The Beautiful Filth
Small moment, but very powerful delivery. I love how you used flashbacks to bring out how she lost her hand, even if she hated to think about it.

Small moment, but very powerful delivery. I love how you used flashbacks to bring out how she lost her hand, even if she hated to think about it.
1/28/2016 c1 cap
Is it awk that I JUST wrote a story about a guy who makes his friend's nightmares "just go away"?
Anyway I like this a lot. Wedding ring maybe? Idk. Nice shift with the women being the veteran instead of the dude. Awesome GIRL POWER
Cheers,
Cap
Is it awk that I JUST wrote a story about a guy who makes his friend's nightmares "just go away"?
Anyway I like this a lot. Wedding ring maybe? Idk. Nice shift with the women being the veteran instead of the dude. Awesome GIRL POWER
Cheers,
Cap