for The Venetian's Fake Fiancee8/11/2017 c10 Guest
So, you going to make us beg? Oh well, fine. Please, please, please write some more!
So, you going to make us beg? Oh well, fine. Please, please, please write some more!
7/18/2017 c10 Guest
Any chance you will finish this one? Or maybe you are busy starting another one? But I would love to see how this one ends. Thanks. :)
Any chance you will finish this one? Or maybe you are busy starting another one? But I would love to see how this one ends. Thanks. :)
4/27/2017 c10 Giselle
This is well written. I've visited Venice and this naturally conveys a nice feeling to this softly written romantic story. Hope that you do finish it off as the characters have been nicely fleshed out. Keep up the good work.
This is well written. I've visited Venice and this naturally conveys a nice feeling to this softly written romantic story. Hope that you do finish it off as the characters have been nicely fleshed out. Keep up the good work.
12/29/2016 c10 Guest
I really, really hope that you decide to continue with this one. I think it is very interesting. A really like your historical stories, but this is a nice one too with a little references to history too.
I really, really hope that you decide to continue with this one. I think it is very interesting. A really like your historical stories, but this is a nice one too with a little references to history too.
7/16/2016 c10 Guest
I am enjoying this story and hope that you will continue it.
I am enjoying this story and hope that you will continue it.
5/11/2016 c10 KarasunoFan
Oh I love this determination!It is wonderful that Evie can finally do what she loves. This is what she studied for and always had a passion for. It is wonderful that she gets to indulge it. Of course I am also delighted that she ad Cosimo will be spending more time together.
This was a thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Cannot wait to read more.
Oh I love this determination!It is wonderful that Evie can finally do what she loves. This is what she studied for and always had a passion for. It is wonderful that she gets to indulge it. Of course I am also delighted that she ad Cosimo will be spending more time together.
This was a thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Cannot wait to read more.
5/6/2016 c9 KarasunoFan
Oh man! What a way to leave off! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter :)
Oh man! What a way to leave off! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter :)
4/28/2016 c8 KarasunoFan
Great update! I love this story. Can't wait to find out why he ever cheated on her!
Great update! I love this story. Can't wait to find out why he ever cheated on her!
4/21/2016 c1 KarasunoFan
To Venice! I raise my wine glass and toast to the prospect of reading chapter 8 soon :p
To Venice! I raise my wine glass and toast to the prospect of reading chapter 8 soon :p
4/9/2016 c5 KarasunoFan
I should be doing some much overdue paper work...but your enchanting story has me HOOKED!
I should be doing some much overdue paper work...but your enchanting story has me HOOKED!
3/19/2016 c1 
9Sjoorm
There are a few errors I'll point out here, but I enjoyed this. Always had an interest in romance stories, and this is definitely one of the better ones, how Evie clearly dreads her trip to Venice by chance, your capture of her Manchester slang (albeit internally). I'm confused by the inverted commas comment, do you mean quotation marks or apostrophe's?
You use the phrase "in question" twice within the span of a few paragraphs, you should try to find a similar phrase if you really want to have this put in. Try not to repeat a phrase or word too often like that (if at all).
"Name of six places" should read "names of six places".
Not sure if this was intentional, but "great boat from the airport" doesn't read right to me.
You write "give me one good reason. A good reason". You can remove the first good to give your second sentence more impact.
Besides that, I really enjoyed how she kept correcting Dan, it was clearly that they had an easygoing friendship, one that wasn't new. I didn't feel like two strangers were talking, which I find commonly in dialogue. Besides those errors I didn't find much else, really good first chapter and hope to read more!
9SjoormThere are a few errors I'll point out here, but I enjoyed this. Always had an interest in romance stories, and this is definitely one of the better ones, how Evie clearly dreads her trip to Venice by chance, your capture of her Manchester slang (albeit internally). I'm confused by the inverted commas comment, do you mean quotation marks or apostrophe's?
You use the phrase "in question" twice within the span of a few paragraphs, you should try to find a similar phrase if you really want to have this put in. Try not to repeat a phrase or word too often like that (if at all).
"Name of six places" should read "names of six places".
Not sure if this was intentional, but "great boat from the airport" doesn't read right to me.
You write "give me one good reason. A good reason". You can remove the first good to give your second sentence more impact.
Besides that, I really enjoyed how she kept correcting Dan, it was clearly that they had an easygoing friendship, one that wasn't new. I didn't feel like two strangers were talking, which I find commonly in dialogue. Besides those errors I didn't find much else, really good first chapter and hope to read more!
3/17/2016 c1 9TheBeastlyPrincess
Ok lets begin with WOW. I really liked the way you have "set the stage" so to speak. I think I like it becuase you have not overdone it. You have used the perfect blend of backstory, characterization and an introduction of an interesting plot development to really make a great beginning. It makes me want more already. What I also like was her relationship with Dan, because it is realistic, down to earth and fun. I like their friendly sort of conversation. You have done well there, creating an good sort of laid back atmosphere. Great work, I cant wait to read more!
9TheBeastlyPrincessOk lets begin with WOW. I really liked the way you have "set the stage" so to speak. I think I like it becuase you have not overdone it. You have used the perfect blend of backstory, characterization and an introduction of an interesting plot development to really make a great beginning. It makes me want more already. What I also like was her relationship with Dan, because it is realistic, down to earth and fun. I like their friendly sort of conversation. You have done well there, creating an good sort of laid back atmosphere. Great work, I cant wait to read more!