for The Badboy's Tutor7/31/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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3/29/2016 c1 Guest
This story is like the opening to a rom-com. Light and interesting, I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing!
This story is like the opening to a rom-com. Light and interesting, I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing!
3/19/2016 c1 deleteaccount12345
Kinda cute. Liked her reaction to their kiiiiisss. Could you have described more of their feelings, maybe?
Kinda cute. Liked her reaction to their kiiiiisss. Could you have described more of their feelings, maybe?
2/23/2016 c1 Dimfiery
It's a cliche but the kind of a cliche that's good to read. It's predictable but I love how you've written it. I really hope this was long. The plot is really good. I wish you'll give chance to the characters to grow. It suits you best to write in third person POV. I love the usage of words and ohhh god, Patiiiii you can write. If you keep writing I know you'll make it and since you're still new to writing I can't wait to read a story from you that isn't a cliche but a unique, long and beautifully polished novel-like story. (Feeling magaling ako hahaha sorry but really it feels like you are novice in writing, I mean)
It's a cliche but the kind of a cliche that's good to read. It's predictable but I love how you've written it. I really hope this was long. The plot is really good. I wish you'll give chance to the characters to grow. It suits you best to write in third person POV. I love the usage of words and ohhh god, Patiiiii you can write. If you keep writing I know you'll make it and since you're still new to writing I can't wait to read a story from you that isn't a cliche but a unique, long and beautifully polished novel-like story. (Feeling magaling ako hahaha sorry but really it feels like you are novice in writing, I mean)