for The Right Parts4/25/2016 c2 aesthetic umbrella
oML I JUST SAW THIS
THANKS BOO
Jase and Jeren are hilarious. I love them already! XD
Update when you can if you're still interested! Looking forward to it! :)
oML I JUST SAW THIS
THANKS BOO
Jase and Jeren are hilarious. I love them already! XD
Update when you can if you're still interested! Looking forward to it! :)
3/23/2016 c2 Sarahaahahhahaha
OMFG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! 3
Not as much as Nutella tho
Duh
OMFG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! 3
Not as much as Nutella tho
Duh
3/19/2016 c2 pipergrace
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOODDDDD PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOODDDDD PLEASE UPDATE SOONNNN
3/17/2016 c2 Cherry
Well. That just happened.
Well. That just happened.
3/17/2016 c2 
4SnowflakeSoup
omg jeren
(damnnnnnnnnnnnn these kids have got good credentials! wow)
hee hee how did i know jeren was gonna do this?
can't wait for the next chapter, precie!
4SnowflakeSoupomg jeren
(damnnnnnnnnnnnn these kids have got good credentials! wow)
hee hee how did i know jeren was gonna do this?
can't wait for the next chapter, precie!
3/17/2016 c2 Ethempat
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
EEEEE I IS LOVE THIS SO MUCH I LIKE I LOVE MEEEEE LIKE-YYYY
I think I might be going a little loony.
But awkwardness aside, I really like this. cx Don't rush yourself with updating, and it writer's block hits, don't write until you feel comfortable to.
I really like the end of this chapter, when Jase (I think) screams "NO CLEAVAGE!"
Oh god it's so beautiful. *wipes away a tear*
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
EEEEE I IS LOVE THIS SO MUCH I LIKE I LOVE MEEEEE LIKE-YYYY
I think I might be going a little loony.
But awkwardness aside, I really like this. cx Don't rush yourself with updating, and it writer's block hits, don't write until you feel comfortable to.
I really like the end of this chapter, when Jase (I think) screams "NO CLEAVAGE!"
Oh god it's so beautiful. *wipes away a tear*
3/17/2016 c1 Cherry
Shutoku! I remember that from Kuroko no Basuke. By the way, great prologue! I really like the twins. They seem like cool characters.
Shutoku! I remember that from Kuroko no Basuke. By the way, great prologue! I really like the twins. They seem like cool characters.
3/17/2016 c2 3Da Kaleidoscope
An ACT score of 35?!
I got 40 on a practice one. I think there was an error with the machine...
3Da KaleidoscopeAn ACT score of 35?!
I got 40 on a practice one. I think there was an error with the machine...
3/15/2016 c1 4SnowflakeSoup
ooooh interesting... i'd love to see more!
although, it is a bit difficult to tell jeren and jace apart at times... i hope their characters become easier to distinguish later?
btw i haven't talked to you in a while! how are you?
-Snowy
4SnowflakeSoupooooh interesting... i'd love to see more!
although, it is a bit difficult to tell jeren and jace apart at times... i hope their characters become easier to distinguish later?
btw i haven't talked to you in a while! how are you?
-Snowy
3/15/2016 c1 2LostCriesofTime
This is such a cool story, I like your characters (they were kinda like anime characters who came alive in my head with mannerisms and facial expressions because you set them up so well) and the idea is a timeless classic.
I can't wait to see what you do with it and I definitely look forward to reading more.
Great work!
2LostCriesofTimeThis is such a cool story, I like your characters (they were kinda like anime characters who came alive in my head with mannerisms and facial expressions because you set them up so well) and the idea is a timeless classic.
I can't wait to see what you do with it and I definitely look forward to reading more.
Great work!