for The Bad Boy Is My Babysitter5/17/2017 c4 PassionateStylus
I'm kind of disappointed that you haven't updated the story in a while, but my track record doesn't exactly leave me room to blame either. I like where the story is going and would love to see you continue it when you have the chance. I've already begun speculating on what is in the basement, and how the interaction between Luca and Claudia is going to play out.
That first chapter was a little confusing though, maybe because I don't know what the acronym stands for. I'm still not completely sure if it was switching points of view, points in time, or both. And if it was moving in time, which direction?
I guess I'm saying that with a little more clarity on the first chapter, your story could become a lot more promising. More than it already is, that is.
Anyways, I'll follow this story for now. Hope you start updating again soon.
I'm kind of disappointed that you haven't updated the story in a while, but my track record doesn't exactly leave me room to blame either. I like where the story is going and would love to see you continue it when you have the chance. I've already begun speculating on what is in the basement, and how the interaction between Luca and Claudia is going to play out.
That first chapter was a little confusing though, maybe because I don't know what the acronym stands for. I'm still not completely sure if it was switching points of view, points in time, or both. And if it was moving in time, which direction?
I guess I'm saying that with a little more clarity on the first chapter, your story could become a lot more promising. More than it already is, that is.
Anyways, I'll follow this story for now. Hope you start updating again soon.
5/17/2016 c4 Sarah
Hello! I'm new here.
First of all, fuck you. I hate cliffhangers (even though I love them at the same time)
Furthermore, fantastic story, please update soon! Keep up the good work! 3
Hello! I'm new here.
First of all, fuck you. I hate cliffhangers (even though I love them at the same time)
Furthermore, fantastic story, please update soon! Keep up the good work! 3
5/16/2016 c4 DeathRules
Oh, geez! What is in the basement?
Oh, geez! What is in the basement?
4/28/2016 c3 
2VictoriaRose0013
Love your colorful adjectives. And I have to say that so far the cousin who seems to
“get away with everything” by far is my favorite character.:) Can't wait for more.
2VictoriaRose0013Love your colorful adjectives. And I have to say that so far the cousin who seems to
“get away with everything” by far is my favorite character.:) Can't wait for more.
3/22/2016 c1 2LostCriesofTime
Oooooh what a cool story. I love your main character, she's realistic and sympathetic. I can't wait to meet the "hot guy" and see how Nerissa reacts :P
I really like your writing style, its great. I can't wait to read more :D
2LostCriesofTimeOooooh what a cool story. I love your main character, she's realistic and sympathetic. I can't wait to meet the "hot guy" and see how Nerissa reacts :P
I really like your writing style, its great. I can't wait to read more :D
3/21/2016 c1 6Angel Princess 31
Cute story so far! I totally agree with her about books! There is nothing quite as amazing as they are :)
6Angel Princess 31Cute story so far! I totally agree with her about books! There is nothing quite as amazing as they are :)