for Lassoed Hearts10/10/2016 c26 Liniaru Umique
I told you I was going to stalk you here too! And good thing I did cus I couldnt wait anymore for this chapter
You...YOU...you made me cry writer. You made me CRY! I loved this chapter. I think it was perfect the way you released it but I am open to reading a different version if you decide to update it. Also, to make this public? *-* yes please!
Now, the sweet dynamic of our BellaSon gang was, once again, my favorite part of all this. My heart kept doing happy dances while being torn by the stressful events of the capture and trial.
GODDAMIT BLACKJACK I TOLD YOU TO MOVE DAT ASS Y U DIDNT?! I cant wait for the next episode, I really need to know what happened there that caused the guys to never come. Now, I did notice that Archie wasnt present when the blue jacket dudes went to get Anderson. Actually, I personally dont even think that group of guys were just Archie's, most likely Bella's dad sent a gang of soldiers out too. I am honestly curious, what happened?!
Bella's lies to make it to the trial were the best! Smart girl. And her growth while out in the woods. Damn, makes my heart break even more with that last scene. Anderson! Anderson! She gave everything for you at the end, even her honour and the her standing in her family...DAMMIT THAD AND ARCHIE NEED TO BE HANGED! NOT MY DEAR ANDERSON! /3
I hope you feel better hun and that school and work continue on with good results! Thanks so much for coming back and giving us this as a nice thanksgiving present! So happy to finally see an update after almost a month! Missed you!
Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxox L.U
I told you I was going to stalk you here too! And good thing I did cus I couldnt wait anymore for this chapter
You...YOU...you made me cry writer. You made me CRY! I loved this chapter. I think it was perfect the way you released it but I am open to reading a different version if you decide to update it. Also, to make this public? *-* yes please!
Now, the sweet dynamic of our BellaSon gang was, once again, my favorite part of all this. My heart kept doing happy dances while being torn by the stressful events of the capture and trial.
GODDAMIT BLACKJACK I TOLD YOU TO MOVE DAT ASS Y U DIDNT?! I cant wait for the next episode, I really need to know what happened there that caused the guys to never come. Now, I did notice that Archie wasnt present when the blue jacket dudes went to get Anderson. Actually, I personally dont even think that group of guys were just Archie's, most likely Bella's dad sent a gang of soldiers out too. I am honestly curious, what happened?!
Bella's lies to make it to the trial were the best! Smart girl. And her growth while out in the woods. Damn, makes my heart break even more with that last scene. Anderson! Anderson! She gave everything for you at the end, even her honour and the her standing in her family...DAMMIT THAD AND ARCHIE NEED TO BE HANGED! NOT MY DEAR ANDERSON! /3
I hope you feel better hun and that school and work continue on with good results! Thanks so much for coming back and giving us this as a nice thanksgiving present! So happy to finally see an update after almost a month! Missed you!
Xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxooxox L.U
10/10/2016 c26 KarasunoFan
I am going to have a heart attack and die. I don't think I will make it til the next chapter. My heart is shredded after this. I honestly cannot believe Thaddeus lied like he did. Her father's reaction I do understand but that Thaddeus...he seemed to me like his greatest failing was his weakness, he did not strike me as petty nor dishonest...but his actions...he is a mendacious murderer.
I am going to have a heart attack and die. I don't think I will make it til the next chapter. My heart is shredded after this. I honestly cannot believe Thaddeus lied like he did. Her father's reaction I do understand but that Thaddeus...he seemed to me like his greatest failing was his weakness, he did not strike me as petty nor dishonest...but his actions...he is a mendacious murderer.
9/22/2016 c25 lillyput
I'm really enjoying this story. You have very truthful characters who never drastically change or do a sudden 180. And might I add very realistic characters as much as people want to ignore the fact that their are people who do bad things. There story's are more interesting. I am egerly awaiting a new chapter.
I'm really enjoying this story. You have very truthful characters who never drastically change or do a sudden 180. And might I add very realistic characters as much as people want to ignore the fact that their are people who do bad things. There story's are more interesting. I am egerly awaiting a new chapter.
9/18/2016 c12 
1MiseryLovedHer
God, this was a heartwrenchingly beautiful chapter...especially how Frank demonstrated to her how little 500 dollars was in his mind when it comes to her.
1MiseryLovedHerGod, this was a heartwrenchingly beautiful chapter...especially how Frank demonstrated to her how little 500 dollars was in his mind when it comes to her.
9/18/2016 c2 Liniaru Umique
I didnt know you were posting this on fictionpress! Yeey! So now Im gonna stalk you here too -creepy fan- just sayin' -gives hug- teehee xoxox L.U.
I didnt know you were posting this on fictionpress! Yeey! So now Im gonna stalk you here too -creepy fan- just sayin' -gives hug- teehee xoxox L.U.
9/14/2016 c1 Guest
Love it so far!
Love it so far!
9/13/2016 c25 Tintenfleck
The last few days I can't put aside this story (my family was not very amused). Sometimes the dialogues were a bit to annoying, to much talking about their relationship, I'm not enough a romance reader for this. But I really like your damaged characters. Anderson is not a gentle, sensitive lover. He is not misunderstood. He really has an unhealthy attitude about love, life and law. But I can understand, why she cares for him. Your were doing a great job in making him somehow likeable. I'm curious about the ending and your next story.
(sorry for bad English - not my mothertongue)
The last few days I can't put aside this story (my family was not very amused). Sometimes the dialogues were a bit to annoying, to much talking about their relationship, I'm not enough a romance reader for this. But I really like your damaged characters. Anderson is not a gentle, sensitive lover. He is not misunderstood. He really has an unhealthy attitude about love, life and law. But I can understand, why she cares for him. Your were doing a great job in making him somehow likeable. I'm curious about the ending and your next story.
(sorry for bad English - not my mothertongue)
9/13/2016 c25 Xxscriboxx
This has been their MO from chapter one - it's a volitile relationship that has the potential for great tenderness. From the beginning we've seen that ability for tenderness from Frank. Even the desire for it. I loved the chapter. You write a story like this, you're bound to wind up the crazies. Keep it up!
This has been their MO from chapter one - it's a volitile relationship that has the potential for great tenderness. From the beginning we've seen that ability for tenderness from Frank. Even the desire for it. I loved the chapter. You write a story like this, you're bound to wind up the crazies. Keep it up!
9/13/2016 c25 Guest
Getting tired of her winding him up before breaking out into a panic attack/ ptsd sufferer whenever he threatens to spank her. She's not that daft to behave like she doesn't know she's goading him. The story's taken such a quick turn from possessive and brutal love to them musing about marriage. Also, now bring on the revenge, really? Another cliche. Every fic has a chapter where it's a flop. This is one of them. I'll read the next chapter and see if it doesn't go downhill from then on.
Getting tired of her winding him up before breaking out into a panic attack/ ptsd sufferer whenever he threatens to spank her. She's not that daft to behave like she doesn't know she's goading him. The story's taken such a quick turn from possessive and brutal love to them musing about marriage. Also, now bring on the revenge, really? Another cliche. Every fic has a chapter where it's a flop. This is one of them. I'll read the next chapter and see if it doesn't go downhill from then on.
9/12/2016 c25 KarasunoFan
Well shucks! I appreciate how compassionate you were with Susanna. Oh my heart aches at her 'job description' and her thoughts when she considered how Frank touched her.
I have to say something that might shock you. I actually feel for Archie too. He seems to be another soul wrecked by circumstances.
Thanks again for sharing your talent here. This is a wonderful reading experience.
And thanks :)
Whoa this was quite a chapter!
Well shucks! I appreciate how compassionate you were with Susanna. Oh my heart aches at her 'job description' and her thoughts when she considered how Frank touched her.
I have to say something that might shock you. I actually feel for Archie too. He seems to be another soul wrecked by circumstances.
Thanks again for sharing your talent here. This is a wonderful reading experience.
And thanks :)
Whoa this was quite a chapter!
9/12/2016 c25 dipsydoodle1
I do feel bad for Susanna and seriously dislike crazy Archie even more. Of course enjoyed Frank and Arabella's portion of this chapter.
I do feel bad for Susanna and seriously dislike crazy Archie even more. Of course enjoyed Frank and Arabella's portion of this chapter.
9/10/2016 c24 Guest
Something tells me she's gonna get pregnant. His pull out game was always strong in the past but this time he threw caution to the wind. :P
Something tells me she's gonna get pregnant. His pull out game was always strong in the past but this time he threw caution to the wind. :P
9/9/2016 c9 Sinalist
Vengeance is too cliché for me. I'm out.
Vengeance is too cliché for me. I'm out.