for Lassoed Hearts9/9/2016 c24 Guest
Yes!
I love the progression of the characters and the storylines!
Thank you for posting updates so frequently, I always look forward to them! :)
Yes!
I love the progression of the characters and the storylines!
Thank you for posting updates so frequently, I always look forward to them! :)
9/8/2016 c3 Sinalist
'S good so far. Wish he would be a bit more obsessive/possessive...also hope he doesn't rape her (or at least not right away).
I like your setting, great start!
'S good so far. Wish he would be a bit more obsessive/possessive...also hope he doesn't rape her (or at least not right away).
I like your setting, great start!
9/7/2016 c1 Tintenfleck
I just read chapter one and I'm so in love with this story yet. Your writing style is marvelous and it's going straight into the plot. I really like this.
I just read chapter one and I'm so in love with this story yet. Your writing style is marvelous and it's going straight into the plot. I really like this.
9/6/2016 c24 Guest
I wonder if Arabella will leave Frank behind or something akin to it. Most fics usually end with the guy typically getting the girl unless he dies which make for great tragedy but I don't get the impression it will. Maybe she will take on his lifestyle it's kind of like Tarzan and Jane :P. Hopefully you give her fiancé some redemption instead of turning him into a bad guy or making his life worse which a lot of fics again like to do for no reason at all. Seems unfair to me.
I wonder if Arabella will leave Frank behind or something akin to it. Most fics usually end with the guy typically getting the girl unless he dies which make for great tragedy but I don't get the impression it will. Maybe she will take on his lifestyle it's kind of like Tarzan and Jane :P. Hopefully you give her fiancé some redemption instead of turning him into a bad guy or making his life worse which a lot of fics again like to do for no reason at all. Seems unfair to me.
9/6/2016 c24 dipsydoodle1
Thank God they finally had it out. I like these two. The good, bad and ugly.
Thank God they finally had it out. I like these two. The good, bad and ugly.
9/6/2016 c24 LetMeWonder
With their passion, pride and chemistry, I wasn't exactly sure how they would get back together. Fantastic job! So pumped to see how it goes with them this time around!
With their passion, pride and chemistry, I wasn't exactly sure how they would get back together. Fantastic job! So pumped to see how it goes with them this time around!
9/5/2016 c24 lauran13
Squeeeeee I'm so happy! Perfectly written. I can't wait to see what happens next. Pay no mind to nasty reviewers. You are a great writer and are in no way condoning abusive relationships. It's fiction, for goodness' sake! And good fiction, at that!
Squeeeeee I'm so happy! Perfectly written. I can't wait to see what happens next. Pay no mind to nasty reviewers. You are a great writer and are in no way condoning abusive relationships. It's fiction, for goodness' sake! And good fiction, at that!
9/5/2016 c24 Hannah
Another update so fast! I love this story so much. Please update soon!
Another update so fast! I love this story so much. Please update soon!
9/5/2016 c24 Guest
Methinks that reviewer has missed the entire point of what you are doing...
Methinks that reviewer has missed the entire point of what you are doing...
9/5/2016 c24 
12XxScriboLegoxX
Generally, I send my reviews through PM for this story but Miss Pretentious kind of pissed me off. It's one thing to criticize an author, even after they have been beyond upfront with the type of the story this is going to be, and eluded to it in multiple author's note, but to hide behind an anonymous review to do it is just pathetic.
Don't be discouraged at all. Some people are so fanatic about extreme-feminism they can't enjoy simple fantasy, and it angers them so greatly that they just can't stand but tell everyone they disagree with how disgusting they are. Again, I find it rather pathetic.
Love the story! Hope to see more soon!
12XxScriboLegoxXGenerally, I send my reviews through PM for this story but Miss Pretentious kind of pissed me off. It's one thing to criticize an author, even after they have been beyond upfront with the type of the story this is going to be, and eluded to it in multiple author's note, but to hide behind an anonymous review to do it is just pathetic.
Don't be discouraged at all. Some people are so fanatic about extreme-feminism they can't enjoy simple fantasy, and it angers them so greatly that they just can't stand but tell everyone they disagree with how disgusting they are. Again, I find it rather pathetic.
Love the story! Hope to see more soon!
9/5/2016 c24 Guest
Interesting choice you made here. But i suppose it was the only way they could eventually end up together. If you couldn't raise Frank up to meet Arabella, then of course you had to lower her way, way down to meet him. Sadly, this is what happens in just about all abusive relationships. I wish you well as an author but the willful self-degredation of any human being is not something i care to keep reading about in fiction. Maybe one day you will understand why... it happens all too often in life and it isn't romantic. It's sickening.
By all means, go ahead and become the apologist for men like Frank. The world is full of people who enable this kind of behaviour. No doubt your readers will be outraged by my pointing out the things they don't want to think about. It's fine. I won't be back to read any of their misplaced critisisms.
Interesting choice you made here. But i suppose it was the only way they could eventually end up together. If you couldn't raise Frank up to meet Arabella, then of course you had to lower her way, way down to meet him. Sadly, this is what happens in just about all abusive relationships. I wish you well as an author but the willful self-degredation of any human being is not something i care to keep reading about in fiction. Maybe one day you will understand why... it happens all too often in life and it isn't romantic. It's sickening.
By all means, go ahead and become the apologist for men like Frank. The world is full of people who enable this kind of behaviour. No doubt your readers will be outraged by my pointing out the things they don't want to think about. It's fine. I won't be back to read any of their misplaced critisisms.
9/5/2016 c24 KarasunoFan
WHOA! That was intense.
I still wish there was a way she and Frank could be together AND she would be in her parents' lives.
WHOA! That was intense.
I still wish there was a way she and Frank could be together AND she would be in her parents' lives.
9/5/2016 c22 Guest
Gosh I love this fic. Stumbled upon it through a lengthy search and haven't stopped reading it since last night. Finally caught up to the latest chapter and cannot wait for me. Can't wait to read what happens next, and can't wait to read your new stories. Hope to read some fics from you with perhaps more multicoloured folks in the future I can just imagine it being just as good. You writing it's thrilling and engaging!
Gosh I love this fic. Stumbled upon it through a lengthy search and haven't stopped reading it since last night. Finally caught up to the latest chapter and cannot wait for me. Can't wait to read what happens next, and can't wait to read your new stories. Hope to read some fics from you with perhaps more multicoloured folks in the future I can just imagine it being just as good. You writing it's thrilling and engaging!
9/5/2016 c23 Guest
great chapter!
great chapter!
9/4/2016 c23 amara
fab chapter!
fab chapter!