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6/23/2017 c3 8LorrahBear
I particularly love the line when both the angel and demon shout amen. :)
6/23/2017 c2 LorrahBear
This made me laugh. I love it!
6/22/2017 c1 LorrahBear
(I realized that somehow, is jumped to the most recent chapter last time, so I went back to the start.)

I felt this was so mean, until the end. You had me going! But now I feel that it's overly harsh. Nice job, pulling my emotions around.
6/22/2017 c64 LorrahBear
I like the conversation in poetry form. It's too bad they took a lot of the "life-sciences" out of school, but gosh, there's so much to learn. I have faith. :)
6/14/2017 c1 DisWist
I can't stand iambic pentameter and rhyme tbh, but I admire you for being able to do it. I don't really understand meter.
4/23/2017 c42 TDG
Flows beautifully. You did make use of my synesthesia, right?
Green with the grey.
4/17/2017 c42 4Phoenix O'Hara
Woww... That ending was gorgeous and while I confess I don't completely understand the poem, it was still beautiful.
3/25/2017 c34 6ATACLC
Some of the best anime fanfictions are by guys. Did I forget to mention George deValier?
3/13/2017 c4 TDG
Respond by PMing The-Dedicated-Girls
I'm also Lena...

Oh Mein Gott... this... this was it was intense. I like this very much.
3/13/2017 c2 Lena
Uh...
I have a bit of the same problem. I keep on pulling out my hairs... once, I pulled out 50...
There's a slight scab on my head from where I was itching.
I hate Asian stereotypes.
12/23/2016 c1 1TheVerse
I could just FEEL the emotion in this and it was breathtaking.
12/3/2016 c9 4Phoenix O'Hara
This is beautiful and amazing and haunting AND DARLING ARE YOU OKAY
6/29/2016 c1 17lunarchroniclesandcockatiels
Really, really interesting...

Awesome profile by the way!
4/3/2016 c1 4Phoenix O'Hara
Your writing was just so unbelievable raw, in a twisted, beautiful kind of way. If this is in any way related to what you go through at home, then... I'm sorry. I'm sorry that I can't do much other than review this and hope it makes you feel better. If it's any consolation, this was unlike anything I've ever read before, in a unique, enchanting way. That makes it sound like a fairytale, but it's not. It's more like the bitter thoughts of a betrayed antagonist. It's a distorted sense of beauty, the kind that's hard to see. And the ending... The ending was haunting. The kind that stays with you for a long time after the words are read.
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