for Petit Souci6/22/2017 c1 LorrahBear
(I realized that somehow, is jumped to the most recent chapter last time, so I went back to the start.)
I felt this was so mean, until the end. You had me going! But now I feel that it's overly harsh. Nice job, pulling my emotions around.
(I realized that somehow, is jumped to the most recent chapter last time, so I went back to the start.)
I felt this was so mean, until the end. You had me going! But now I feel that it's overly harsh. Nice job, pulling my emotions around.
6/22/2017 c64 LorrahBear
I like the conversation in poetry form. It's too bad they took a lot of the "life-sciences" out of school, but gosh, there's so much to learn. I have faith. :)
I like the conversation in poetry form. It's too bad they took a lot of the "life-sciences" out of school, but gosh, there's so much to learn. I have faith. :)
6/14/2017 c1 DisWist
I can't stand iambic pentameter and rhyme tbh, but I admire you for being able to do it. I don't really understand meter.
I can't stand iambic pentameter and rhyme tbh, but I admire you for being able to do it. I don't really understand meter.
4/23/2017 c42 TDG
Flows beautifully. You did make use of my synesthesia, right?
Green with the grey.
Flows beautifully. You did make use of my synesthesia, right?
Green with the grey.
4/17/2017 c42 
4Phoenix O'Hara
Woww... That ending was gorgeous and while I confess I don't completely understand the poem, it was still beautiful.
4Phoenix O'HaraWoww... That ending was gorgeous and while I confess I don't completely understand the poem, it was still beautiful.
3/25/2017 c34 6ATACLC
Some of the best anime fanfictions are by guys. Did I forget to mention George deValier?
6ATACLCSome of the best anime fanfictions are by guys. Did I forget to mention George deValier?
3/13/2017 c4 TDG
Respond by PMing The-Dedicated-Girls
I'm also Lena...
Oh Mein Gott... this... this was it was intense. I like this very much.
Respond by PMing The-Dedicated-Girls
I'm also Lena...
Oh Mein Gott... this... this was it was intense. I like this very much.
3/13/2017 c2 Lena
Uh...
I have a bit of the same problem. I keep on pulling out my hairs... once, I pulled out 50...
There's a slight scab on my head from where I was itching.
I hate Asian stereotypes.
Uh...
I have a bit of the same problem. I keep on pulling out my hairs... once, I pulled out 50...
There's a slight scab on my head from where I was itching.
I hate Asian stereotypes.
6/29/2016 c1 17lunarchroniclesandcockatiels
Really, really interesting...
Awesome profile by the way!
17lunarchroniclesandcockatielsReally, really interesting...
Awesome profile by the way!
4/3/2016 c1 4Phoenix O'Hara
Your writing was just so unbelievable raw, in a twisted, beautiful kind of way. If this is in any way related to what you go through at home, then... I'm sorry. I'm sorry that I can't do much other than review this and hope it makes you feel better. If it's any consolation, this was unlike anything I've ever read before, in a unique, enchanting way. That makes it sound like a fairytale, but it's not. It's more like the bitter thoughts of a betrayed antagonist. It's a distorted sense of beauty, the kind that's hard to see. And the ending... The ending was haunting. The kind that stays with you for a long time after the words are read.
4Phoenix O'HaraYour writing was just so unbelievable raw, in a twisted, beautiful kind of way. If this is in any way related to what you go through at home, then... I'm sorry. I'm sorry that I can't do much other than review this and hope it makes you feel better. If it's any consolation, this was unlike anything I've ever read before, in a unique, enchanting way. That makes it sound like a fairytale, but it's not. It's more like the bitter thoughts of a betrayed antagonist. It's a distorted sense of beauty, the kind that's hard to see. And the ending... The ending was haunting. The kind that stays with you for a long time after the words are read.