for Each Misfire2/16/2017 c18 Wavern16 'Inactive
Oh man, why?! Why did you kill the captain?! I have no idea if I want to hate Aiko or not! Is he telling the truth? Is he really just letting all this power go to his head? Is it both?! I need answers woman! ASAP!
Oh man, why?! Why did you kill the captain?! I have no idea if I want to hate Aiko or not! Is he telling the truth? Is he really just letting all this power go to his head? Is it both?! I need answers woman! ASAP!
1/31/2017 c17 Wavern16 'Inactive
Ohhhh, things just going interesting really quick! I want to know what Renly is up to, and if he plans on torturing Elijah, cuz I know how you love your angst, lol. Is he going to use Eli as bait to lure Shuler there? Cuz I have a feeling. :P. Great work buddy!
Ohhhh, things just going interesting really quick! I want to know what Renly is up to, and if he plans on torturing Elijah, cuz I know how you love your angst, lol. Is he going to use Eli as bait to lure Shuler there? Cuz I have a feeling. :P. Great work buddy!
1/24/2017 c16 Wavern16 'Inactive
Wow, okay, I really want to learn more about what Aiko is trying to do. What exactly is the council hiding? Hmmmmm? LOL, great work buddy. I hope you feel better real soon, because if I truly did get you sick, I think I'll have to go into hiding for a while XD
Wow, okay, I really want to learn more about what Aiko is trying to do. What exactly is the council hiding? Hmmmmm? LOL, great work buddy. I hope you feel better real soon, because if I truly did get you sick, I think I'll have to go into hiding for a while XD
1/8/2017 c15 Wavern16 'Inactive
DAMN! And you end it like that?! Whyyyyyy?! LOL, I should be used to it by now, but still. Any who, I'm really sorry I haven't been around much lately bud, like I said, battling sickness THAT TOOK OVER MY ENTIRE VACATION TIME! Sucks so hard and it's completely unfair :( I wanted to come over so bad but I know you would kill me if I got you sick, and I know you would be so sick that you wouldn't work for a while and I didn't want you to use up all your days at work because I got ya sick. I'm really sorry. I feel terrible, really. I owe you lunch and a trip to the bookstore next time we're able to hang. Late Christmas gift! XD
DAMN! And you end it like that?! Whyyyyyy?! LOL, I should be used to it by now, but still. Any who, I'm really sorry I haven't been around much lately bud, like I said, battling sickness THAT TOOK OVER MY ENTIRE VACATION TIME! Sucks so hard and it's completely unfair :( I wanted to come over so bad but I know you would kill me if I got you sick, and I know you would be so sick that you wouldn't work for a while and I didn't want you to use up all your days at work because I got ya sick. I'm really sorry. I feel terrible, really. I owe you lunch and a trip to the bookstore next time we're able to hang. Late Christmas gift! XD
1/2/2017 c14 Wavern16 'Inactive
LOL, wow, you really did update several times XD Sorry buddy, still feeling sick, unfortunately. Was feeling better, but then my grandpa came over for a visit and he had a head cold, and since my immune system was still weak, I believe I somehow managed to get sick again, but not nearly as bad this time. All the same, it sucks so hard. But anyway, great chapters! I really love the character development and dialogue here. I can tell Elijah and Shuler are only going to get closer with more time they spend, and Athena makes some great points over mourning a loved one. And geez la pete, I had no idea Aiko and Shayne were so...rough. I like it. XD Great job!
LOL, wow, you really did update several times XD Sorry buddy, still feeling sick, unfortunately. Was feeling better, but then my grandpa came over for a visit and he had a head cold, and since my immune system was still weak, I believe I somehow managed to get sick again, but not nearly as bad this time. All the same, it sucks so hard. But anyway, great chapters! I really love the character development and dialogue here. I can tell Elijah and Shuler are only going to get closer with more time they spend, and Athena makes some great points over mourning a loved one. And geez la pete, I had no idea Aiko and Shayne were so...rough. I like it. XD Great job!
12/31/2016 c13 Amanda
I just realized how lonely these characters are.
I just realized how lonely these characters are.
12/26/2016 c12 Tye
I didn't feel like logging in on my phone lol but holy crap holy crap holy crap. I was hoping that the tranq and Aiko were unrelated, but now they're after Shuler when he's basically defenseless. I don't care how good of an assassin Shuler is or how great of a soldier Elijah was, Aiko's forces are gonna be way too strong. I'm hoping the Saurian gets there before anything too bad happens, but even then, I'm scared of losing anyone aboard the ship like Athena or Kane. In
I didn't feel like logging in on my phone lol but holy crap holy crap holy crap. I was hoping that the tranq and Aiko were unrelated, but now they're after Shuler when he's basically defenseless. I don't care how good of an assassin Shuler is or how great of a soldier Elijah was, Aiko's forces are gonna be way too strong. I'm hoping the Saurian gets there before anything too bad happens, but even then, I'm scared of losing anyone aboard the ship like Athena or Kane. In
12/24/2016 c11 Dreamcatcher
Hey, it's me. Sorry, I'm a little loopy from the medicine I have to take every so often, so it's a little hard to focus logging in. *Growls* Any who, great work! Sorry it took me so long to review. Being sick sucks. :( As soon as I get better, we'll hang, and I'll buy you a book and lunch for Christmas ;) Merry Christmas buddy! Hope you have a good one!
Hey, it's me. Sorry, I'm a little loopy from the medicine I have to take every so often, so it's a little hard to focus logging in. *Growls* Any who, great work! Sorry it took me so long to review. Being sick sucks. :( As soon as I get better, we'll hang, and I'll buy you a book and lunch for Christmas ;) Merry Christmas buddy! Hope you have a good one!
12/4/2016 c10 
1Avis Atra
Wow, you're a very talented writer :) I love the dynamic you have between most of your characters, especially Elijah and Shuler. The way you're developing their relationship is very interesting to read. I was sad about Quintons death, but I also found it a very powerful part of the story as everything does not always go as planned and it gives the story a more realistic fell knowing that the characters actions have real consequences. I also thought you did a ver good job at depicting Kanes internal conflict over saving his crew vs. following orders. I hope you keep on writing this story as I am looking forward to reading it :)
1Avis AtraWow, you're a very talented writer :) I love the dynamic you have between most of your characters, especially Elijah and Shuler. The way you're developing their relationship is very interesting to read. I was sad about Quintons death, but I also found it a very powerful part of the story as everything does not always go as planned and it gives the story a more realistic fell knowing that the characters actions have real consequences. I also thought you did a ver good job at depicting Kanes internal conflict over saving his crew vs. following orders. I hope you keep on writing this story as I am looking forward to reading it :)
12/3/2016 c10 Wavern16 'Inactive
Ah shoot! Kane defining authority LIKE A BOSS! Love ya, Captain, and those admirals mean well, but they are complete a**holes. I can't believe they would sacrifice soldiers like that. The point of a war is to save as many as you can, despite the risk of death to yourself. Great work buddy! You nailed it!
Ah shoot! Kane defining authority LIKE A BOSS! Love ya, Captain, and those admirals mean well, but they are complete a**holes. I can't believe they would sacrifice soldiers like that. The point of a war is to save as many as you can, despite the risk of death to yourself. Great work buddy! You nailed it!