for The List2/21 c1 anna Marry
Have you tried to post in other platforms? I am so interested in your work. My name is Anna a talent scout for fast-growing platform. May I know how to reach you professionally?
Have you tried to post in other platforms? I am so interested in your work. My name is Anna a talent scout for fast-growing platform. May I know how to reach you professionally?
5/7/2018 c1 
14RaisingDad
Very whimsical and playful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and can't wait to see where you'll take your readers next.
14RaisingDadVery whimsical and playful. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and can't wait to see where you'll take your readers next.
6/28/2017 c1 8LorrahBear
This is a fun first chapter, and I like the scene with the seagull.
Watch out for tense swaps and typos, but some thorough proof reading should help you out with this.
I hope you continue writing!
8LorrahBearThis is a fun first chapter, and I like the scene with the seagull.
Watch out for tense swaps and typos, but some thorough proof reading should help you out with this.
I hope you continue writing!
2/16/2017 c1 6Nightlion
Really light-hearted and good humoured personification. I rly like how it ends.
6NightlionReally light-hearted and good humoured personification. I rly like how it ends.
12/13/2016 c1 20Foxx The Sleepy
I like it, there are some errors that you can catch and easily fix if you reread it, but it's cute and different from what I usually see :) Makes me think it would be a good marine biology creative essay lol
20Foxx The SleepyI like it, there are some errors that you can catch and easily fix if you reread it, but it's cute and different from what I usually see :) Makes me think it would be a good marine biology creative essay lol