for New York Mob Princess9/20/2023 c14 Pennedbyme
You had me reading all chapters past midnight. I know you wrote this a while ago, but you have a good story going here and I wanted to let you know that :)
You had me reading all chapters past midnight. I know you wrote this a while ago, but you have a good story going here and I wanted to let you know that :)
10/18/2021 c1 Guest
I know it's been a minute but I still reread this story a LOT. It's one of my absolute favorites, if you have any chapters drafted please consider releasing them!
I know it's been a minute but I still reread this story a LOT. It's one of my absolute favorites, if you have any chapters drafted please consider releasing them!
8/28/2021 c14 
13Maximum-Strawberry
I like how you made Tony an actual mob guy sort and instead of the fluffy duffy "in the mob but not really violent" trope. I know it's been a while, but if you have any other chapters done, it would be wonderful if you could post them. )
13Maximum-StrawberryI like how you made Tony an actual mob guy sort and instead of the fluffy duffy "in the mob but not really violent" trope. I know it's been a while, but if you have any other chapters done, it would be wonderful if you could post them. )
11/3/2018 c14 Guest
I've waited soooo long for this update. So glad you're back, wonderful chapter.
I've waited soooo long for this update. So glad you're back, wonderful chapter.
10/21/2018 c14 Guest
I am so happy to see an update! I cannot wait to find out how Anthony’s dad responded to Adonis telling him about Anthony and Bella. I’m hoping that we find out what Anthony has planned for Bella. Great update! I can’t wait until the next!
I am so happy to see an update! I cannot wait to find out how Anthony’s dad responded to Adonis telling him about Anthony and Bella. I’m hoping that we find out what Anthony has planned for Bella. Great update! I can’t wait until the next!
10/12/2018 c14 1tootalltoobetrue
YAS! An update . It was really good I was at the edge of my seat the whole time reading this
1tootalltoobetrueYAS! An update . It was really good I was at the edge of my seat the whole time reading this
3/31/2018 c13 Guest
I found your story at and followed you over here. I was so lucky when I came across this story and it has quickly become one of my favorites. I’m hoping that you plan to finish it and I was wondering if you could give us a chapter or two from Anthony’s perspective. This really has become one of my all time favorite stories, please update soon. Thank you again!
I found your story at and followed you over here. I was so lucky when I came across this story and it has quickly become one of my favorites. I’m hoping that you plan to finish it and I was wondering if you could give us a chapter or two from Anthony’s perspective. This really has become one of my all time favorite stories, please update soon. Thank you again!
1/23/2018 c13 Guest
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I’m so happy to see a new chapter. This has quickly become one of my favorite stories. I can’t wait to find out why Anthony is holding them hostage and why he took them. Can we get a chapter from his POV? I can wait for the next update.
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I’m so happy to see a new chapter. This has quickly become one of my favorite stories. I can’t wait to find out why Anthony is holding them hostage and why he took them. Can we get a chapter from his POV? I can wait for the next update.
1/15/2018 c13 slcjnk2008
Happy New Year to you.
I know your really busy, but I'm so happy you shook the dust off this chapter and posted it. It consistently amazes me how good each chapter is, always giving us readers continual surprises with each chapter you write. Bringing in the FBI was mind blowing, how will they help her and her sister or will they just become a pawn for them instead of Anthony. So just know, I'll be here whenever you get your mojo back and school lightens up on you.
Shelley
Happy New Year to you.
I know your really busy, but I'm so happy you shook the dust off this chapter and posted it. It consistently amazes me how good each chapter is, always giving us readers continual surprises with each chapter you write. Bringing in the FBI was mind blowing, how will they help her and her sister or will they just become a pawn for them instead of Anthony. So just know, I'll be here whenever you get your mojo back and school lightens up on you.
Shelley
1/15/2018 c12 slcjnk2008
Great chapter. I was rooting for Isabella to seduce Anthony. It's a dirty and bloody world they exist in, but I do hope that somehow in the end that they do really love each other and this war will end for them both.
Shelley
Great chapter. I was rooting for Isabella to seduce Anthony. It's a dirty and bloody world they exist in, but I do hope that somehow in the end that they do really love each other and this war will end for them both.
Shelley
12/28/2017 c13 Guest
Hello, I've really enjoyed this story. I hope you keep on writing it. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Hello, I've really enjoyed this story. I hope you keep on writing it. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
12/26/2017 c13 Guest
Love it!
Love it!
8/12/2017 c1 Golden Ground
I just read this in a day and I couldn't stop! It's difficult subject matter and I know the challenge of writing characters that are so layered and complex. I've read a review or two below that question Bella and her back and forth but to me you've written this in a way that makes perfect sense. Look at her family and the examples of love that she sees. Look at the terrible, uncontrollable situation that she's in. It's no surprise that a 16 year old girl with a family like that would have a broken idea of what love is. Her falling for Anthony, even after what he did, isn't crazy. I think if she were some crazy strong person all of a sudden, after years of being told that she doesn't have choice or power, that would be unbeleivable. What you've written seems natural and I don't think you should doubt that . Good job! I'm excited to see where this goes from here!
I just read this in a day and I couldn't stop! It's difficult subject matter and I know the challenge of writing characters that are so layered and complex. I've read a review or two below that question Bella and her back and forth but to me you've written this in a way that makes perfect sense. Look at her family and the examples of love that she sees. Look at the terrible, uncontrollable situation that she's in. It's no surprise that a 16 year old girl with a family like that would have a broken idea of what love is. Her falling for Anthony, even after what he did, isn't crazy. I think if she were some crazy strong person all of a sudden, after years of being told that she doesn't have choice or power, that would be unbeleivable. What you've written seems natural and I don't think you should doubt that . Good job! I'm excited to see where this goes from here!