
12/29/2016 c1 You'llNeverKnow
While rereading this story today, I finally realised that Phaestus was named after Hephaistos/Hephaestus. I feel like an idiot for not seeing it earlier... :-)
While rereading this story today, I finally realised that Phaestus was named after Hephaistos/Hephaestus. I feel like an idiot for not seeing it earlier... :-)
12/22/2016 c1 You'llNeverKnow
Just wanted to let you know that I bought your book and I am so happy! Now I can always read it without needing internet! Will you also publish your other stories?
Just wanted to let you know that I bought your book and I am so happy! Now I can always read it without needing internet! Will you also publish your other stories?
12/14/2016 c2 Guest
damn it i was tryna read this
damn it i was tryna read this
12/6/2016 c25
3Freezing Moon
... i wrote the last two reviews. seriously though, This story was almost too alike to "from Far away". yes a lot of your story was different but there was several key points, backstories, and characters that were just too similar to be a coincidence. Please tell me: did you read that manga and this is a Homage or something?
I do like your writing style, its fun.

... i wrote the last two reviews. seriously though, This story was almost too alike to "from Far away". yes a lot of your story was different but there was several key points, backstories, and characters that were just too similar to be a coincidence. Please tell me: did you read that manga and this is a Homage or something?
I do like your writing style, its fun.
12/6/2016 c17 Guest
I'm still feeling Dejavu from plot points and character backgrounds but I love the characters personalities. So fun and interesting! I look forward to seeing how u end it. Really makes me wanna reread "from far away".
I'm still feeling Dejavu from plot points and character backgrounds but I love the characters personalities. So fun and interesting! I look forward to seeing how u end it. Really makes me wanna reread "from far away".
12/5/2016 c1 Guest
So far interesting. Honestly though this story reminds me greatly of a 90s manga called From Far away. Ever heard of it? The set up is very similar. I'll let you know what I think as i read though, I'm always game for a world traveler story. :3
So far interesting. Honestly though this story reminds me greatly of a 90s manga called From Far away. Ever heard of it? The set up is very similar. I'll let you know what I think as i read though, I'm always game for a world traveler story. :3
11/30/2016 c25 Guest
I like stories of fantasy genre, loved yours very much, characters were all nicely build, in the end you got all threads nicely joined together and lastly, thankyou for putting this up here for free read, enjoyed it immensely. In fact, you should try to get things published, All the Best :).
I like stories of fantasy genre, loved yours very much, characters were all nicely build, in the end you got all threads nicely joined together and lastly, thankyou for putting this up here for free read, enjoyed it immensely. In fact, you should try to get things published, All the Best :).
11/27/2016 c25 XD
Very well written. Great job! :D
Very well written. Great job! :D
11/24/2016 c25 Anon J
So sad to see it come to an end... but i thoroughly enjoyed the journey! :)
So sad to see it come to an end... but i thoroughly enjoyed the journey! :)
11/23/2016 c25 Guest
Ugh, so damn good! I didn't want it to end but you did so in a great way :'3 great story, great author, definitely worth a reread!
Ugh, so damn good! I didn't want it to end but you did so in a great way :'3 great story, great author, definitely worth a reread!
11/23/2016 c25 Jaida615
This was so beautiful. Are you writing more relating to this story? Like with their children or something? I don't want it to end! Again, so beautiful; I cried. Please write more!
This was so beautiful. Are you writing more relating to this story? Like with their children or something? I don't want it to end! Again, so beautiful; I cried. Please write more!
11/23/2016 c25
2C. M. Brighid Bachleda
Wish there was a second Epilogue for the reaction from family and friends...
But this is beautiful and hope it will be published somday...

Wish there was a second Epilogue for the reaction from family and friends...
But this is beautiful and hope it will be published somday...
11/22/2016 c24 Anon J
Looking forward to more :)
Looking forward to more :)
11/16/2016 c24 Jaida615
Yay! Loved it. Probably now my favorite chapter. Can't wait till next week!
Yay! Loved it. Probably now my favorite chapter. Can't wait till next week!