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38Starart152
This is an interesting chapter where France is on match to attack England with Jeanne alive. As for the crime not yet done, I wonder who it is.
38Starart152This is an interesting chapter where France is on match to attack England with Jeanne alive. As for the crime not yet done, I wonder who it is.
6/9/2018 c1 6Darth Zannacross
A ominous start indeed, will this lead to the next Mummy movie? Only one way to find out but a foreboding tone to set the mood so nice work, till next time.
6Darth ZannacrossA ominous start indeed, will this lead to the next Mummy movie? Only one way to find out but a foreboding tone to set the mood so nice work, till next time.
6/9/2018 c5 38Starart152
This is a nice chapter very well presented at how Napoleone saved Jeanne from her fate and how it isn't the end of his duty. I wonder what is next.
38Starart152This is a nice chapter very well presented at how Napoleone saved Jeanne from her fate and how it isn't the end of his duty. I wonder what is next.
6/4/2016 c4 Starart152
This is another nice chapter in which we saw that Jeanne will soon meet her fate, but Napoleon wants to change it for another future.
I like how the story is moving forward with the poem and how everything seems to give a fast-paced story, but in a beautiful way.
This is another nice chapter in which we saw that Jeanne will soon meet her fate, but Napoleon wants to change it for another future.
I like how the story is moving forward with the poem and how everything seems to give a fast-paced story, but in a beautiful way.
6/4/2016 c3 Starart152
Another good poem to tell the story of Jeanne d'Arc during the 100 years war. It is short, but I like the details you gave between her and the soldiers.
The rest of the review is the same as previous. I like the details you put and how you describe the moment Jeanne was going down with the six thousand.
Another good poem to tell the story of Jeanne d'Arc during the 100 years war. It is short, but I like the details you gave between her and the soldiers.
The rest of the review is the same as previous. I like the details you put and how you describe the moment Jeanne was going down with the six thousand.
6/4/2016 c2 Starart152
This is a nice continuation of the previous poem. I like how your poem is telling a story and the descriptions of the characters, minimalist, is enough for short chapter in this.
For the poem, it is the same thing as previous chapter with the rythme in there which most called lots of effort to find the right words to deliver this in a really good way.
This is a nice continuation of the previous poem. I like how your poem is telling a story and the descriptions of the characters, minimalist, is enough for short chapter in this.
For the poem, it is the same thing as previous chapter with the rythme in there which most called lots of effort to find the right words to deliver this in a really good way.
6/4/2016 c1 Starart152
I do not have much to said because poetry isn't my forte, so I cannot say if it's good or bad by itself.
What I is that the poetry has good rythme in it. Most of them has it, but paragraph doesn't have rythme in it.
You present in a very nice way the thought of Napoleon in this poem and I liked how the writing was in general.
I do not have much to said because poetry isn't my forte, so I cannot say if it's good or bad by itself.
What I is that the poetry has good rythme in it. Most of them has it, but paragraph doesn't have rythme in it.
You present in a very nice way the thought of Napoleon in this poem and I liked how the writing was in general.