for Eternity is Forever5/4/2017 c25 slcjnk2008
Absolutely incredible and wonderful book. I'm looking forward to reading more adventures from them all in Eternal Youth. Thank you so much for having such a brilliantly creative mind and the superb writing skills to share these books with us readers. - Shelley
Absolutely incredible and wonderful book. I'm looking forward to reading more adventures from them all in Eternal Youth. Thank you so much for having such a brilliantly creative mind and the superb writing skills to share these books with us readers. - Shelley
5/4/2017 c24 slcjnk2008
Even though the fight is still on, I can breathe again knowing Nadia and Anna are okay. I'm looking forward to Pan seeing Nadia after his change which was just brilliant. Thank you Narayan.
Shelley
Even though the fight is still on, I can breathe again knowing Nadia and Anna are okay. I'm looking forward to Pan seeing Nadia after his change which was just brilliant. Thank you Narayan.
Shelley
5/4/2017 c23 slcjnk2008
I'm blown away by your ability to create and share this series of inter-related yet standalone novels is remarkable and rare in an author. Your technical writing is impeccable and I'm already excited to buy them as well as frustrated that I need to wait until you are ready to publish them commercially. So in the meantime I'll finish reading this one and go onto Nadia's and Pan's book. - Shelley
I'm blown away by your ability to create and share this series of inter-related yet standalone novels is remarkable and rare in an author. Your technical writing is impeccable and I'm already excited to buy them as well as frustrated that I need to wait until you are ready to publish them commercially. So in the meantime I'll finish reading this one and go onto Nadia's and Pan's book. - Shelley
5/3/2017 c22 slcjnk2008
Thank goodness Nadia is going to be alright. Although it might just be wishful thinking on my part, I hope that at some point she will get her normal eyesight back. Now to find out what's going on with Anna. - Shelley
Thank goodness Nadia is going to be alright. Although it might just be wishful thinking on my part, I hope that at some point she will get her normal eyesight back. Now to find out what's going on with Anna. - Shelley
5/3/2017 c21 slcjnk2008
There is so much happening in this chapter, I'm stunned and excited to find out what Pan is going to do and what's happening with Anna and who is "the master" really and how is Nadia doing? So much going on I can't help but hold my breath to find out all the answers. This is such an awesome book.
Shelley
There is so much happening in this chapter, I'm stunned and excited to find out what Pan is going to do and what's happening with Anna and who is "the master" really and how is Nadia doing? So much going on I can't help but hold my breath to find out all the answers. This is such an awesome book.
Shelley
3/17/2017 c25 
18Moonvibe
A fantastic ending to another fantastic tale!
With Anna now initiated into the family the Alliance can regroup and fortify their ranks. I really liked her assessment of the overall situation near the end. Even if the Guild has gotten away with another artefact they still have to recoup some funds and get operations rolling again. And the new additions to the Alliance will hopefully catch Scorpion and Nicholas off guard the next time around.
Dray's jovial outburst was unexpected. Lol. He's always been such a humorless and stoic figure. I loved that!
This has been another truly captivating and intricately woven tale that has been a total blast from start to finish. Great work and superb storytelling! There was some nice closure and enticing arcs to wrap this one up. As always you leave much to look forward to. :)
18MoonvibeA fantastic ending to another fantastic tale!
With Anna now initiated into the family the Alliance can regroup and fortify their ranks. I really liked her assessment of the overall situation near the end. Even if the Guild has gotten away with another artefact they still have to recoup some funds and get operations rolling again. And the new additions to the Alliance will hopefully catch Scorpion and Nicholas off guard the next time around.
Dray's jovial outburst was unexpected. Lol. He's always been such a humorless and stoic figure. I loved that!
This has been another truly captivating and intricately woven tale that has been a total blast from start to finish. Great work and superb storytelling! There was some nice closure and enticing arcs to wrap this one up. As always you leave much to look forward to. :)
3/12/2017 c24 Guest
Another perfect pairing sealed with the bond of Matehood. :)
No doubt Anna will make a welcome addition to the fold, esp with all her tactical abilities, but it's her fire and wit that her new Mate will appreciate most. Hawke has finally met his match and that's a good thing. He's got an equal in his Mate. She's no damsel in distress but rather a butt kicking beauty who can share in his adventures.
I really like the explanation behind her tattoo and bleached hair strand that remained. Not only was that revealing about the nature of the change but also about her untamed spirit.
And the mending of father/daughter bond was touching too. Clint has his cross to bear for sure, but now he and Anna can work on righting their own wrongs with one another. It seems that even though the Guild struck a mighty blow in this story, the Alliance still comes out stronger with the addition of new members and new abilities.
Great chapter! It was very moving and very steamy. ;)
Another perfect pairing sealed with the bond of Matehood. :)
No doubt Anna will make a welcome addition to the fold, esp with all her tactical abilities, but it's her fire and wit that her new Mate will appreciate most. Hawke has finally met his match and that's a good thing. He's got an equal in his Mate. She's no damsel in distress but rather a butt kicking beauty who can share in his adventures.
I really like the explanation behind her tattoo and bleached hair strand that remained. Not only was that revealing about the nature of the change but also about her untamed spirit.
And the mending of father/daughter bond was touching too. Clint has his cross to bear for sure, but now he and Anna can work on righting their own wrongs with one another. It seems that even though the Guild struck a mighty blow in this story, the Alliance still comes out stronger with the addition of new members and new abilities.
Great chapter! It was very moving and very steamy. ;)
3/4/2017 c25 Magpiesview
Loved the wrap up of this book and it leaves me begging for more. I can't wait for the next book about Nadia and Pan. I can't wait for Nicholas to get what's coming to him and I can't wait to see what Scorpion has up his sleeve. This was a fantastic book in a fantastic series. Can't wait for book 7.
Loved the wrap up of this book and it leaves me begging for more. I can't wait for the next book about Nadia and Pan. I can't wait for Nicholas to get what's coming to him and I can't wait to see what Scorpion has up his sleeve. This was a fantastic book in a fantastic series. Can't wait for book 7.
2/26/2017 c23 Moonvibe
Wow! Two very gripping exchanges in this chapter that will no doubt have rippling ramifications moving forward in this series.
First off, Pan's transformation was vivid and exciting. Narayan's plan was high risk to say the least, but it seems to have paid off in a big way. 6' 2" to be exact. ;) Pan is in for a world of discovery, and the Alliance has just gotten a little bit stronger from his transformation. Narayan's reasoning that Nicholas now possesses unknown strengths and abilities alludes to a much more formidible foe than just a crazed vampire serial killer.
And I totally did not expect Marek to come clean about his moonlighting gig of impersonation without some arm twisting. Literally. Lol. It seems a bit of a guilty conscience along with looming threats gave the skinwalker a change of heart. Alaric took it well too, already devising how to use it to the Alliance's advantage. Marek just keeps finding himself in deeper waters. Lol.
A very compelling chapter and one that leaves me eager for future events! Well done!
Wow! Two very gripping exchanges in this chapter that will no doubt have rippling ramifications moving forward in this series.
First off, Pan's transformation was vivid and exciting. Narayan's plan was high risk to say the least, but it seems to have paid off in a big way. 6' 2" to be exact. ;) Pan is in for a world of discovery, and the Alliance has just gotten a little bit stronger from his transformation. Narayan's reasoning that Nicholas now possesses unknown strengths and abilities alludes to a much more formidible foe than just a crazed vampire serial killer.
And I totally did not expect Marek to come clean about his moonlighting gig of impersonation without some arm twisting. Literally. Lol. It seems a bit of a guilty conscience along with looming threats gave the skinwalker a change of heart. Alaric took it well too, already devising how to use it to the Alliance's advantage. Marek just keeps finding himself in deeper waters. Lol.
A very compelling chapter and one that leaves me eager for future events! Well done!
2/26/2017 c24 Magpiesview
Yet another great chapter. So Hawke and Anna are finally together forever, yay. I can't wait for Pan to see Nadia again, the sparks are going to fly!
Yet another great chapter. So Hawke and Anna are finally together forever, yay. I can't wait for Pan to see Nadia again, the sparks are going to fly!
2/19/2017 c24 alycatt13
I love your stories! I'm so excited for Pan and Nadia's adventure, which I'm hoping is coming soon!
I love your stories! I'm so excited for Pan and Nadia's adventure, which I'm hoping is coming soon!
2/18/2017 c22 Moonvibe
This was both a very heartfelt and a very exciting chapter. The setting of the manor was brilliantly atmospheric and the mood was thickly somber. Very fitting for the mournful gathering around Nadia. Her deteriorating condition was illustrated painfully well. I felt horrible for her and Pan both as they endured the brunt of the reality staring them squarely in the heart.
The twist with Paige was highly unexpected though, but sheer genius at the same time. The logic behind the effects of the Cup really started to click and cut the bereaving air with hope. That was a fascinating development and one that Paige and Nadia both will have to be responsible with in the future. Great storytelling and a really compelling addition to the growing mythology of this wonderful series.
Excellent chapter! :)
This was both a very heartfelt and a very exciting chapter. The setting of the manor was brilliantly atmospheric and the mood was thickly somber. Very fitting for the mournful gathering around Nadia. Her deteriorating condition was illustrated painfully well. I felt horrible for her and Pan both as they endured the brunt of the reality staring them squarely in the heart.
The twist with Paige was highly unexpected though, but sheer genius at the same time. The logic behind the effects of the Cup really started to click and cut the bereaving air with hope. That was a fascinating development and one that Paige and Nadia both will have to be responsible with in the future. Great storytelling and a really compelling addition to the growing mythology of this wonderful series.
Excellent chapter! :)
2/7/2017 c23 Efra
Omg thank you! I love this so much! You're awesome! Omggggg yay! Awesome twist! Omg I can't wait to see her reaction. Omg! I can't wait for the next installment!
Omg thank you! I love this so much! You're awesome! Omggggg yay! Awesome twist! Omg I can't wait to see her reaction. Omg! I can't wait for the next installment!
2/4/2017 c22 Guest
More chapters please!
More chapters please!
2/4/2017 c23 Magpiesview
Fantastic! Now Pan's fully grown there's nothing standing in the way of him and Nadia getting together. Hay :)
Fantastic! Now Pan's fully grown there's nothing standing in the way of him and Nadia getting together. Hay :)