for The Rookie7/20/2017 c1 
1lover17
This was a great insight into Boon's mind and the fact that it adds some snapshots was amazing.
1lover17This was a great insight into Boon's mind and the fact that it adds some snapshots was amazing.
6/27/2017 c1 foxbagels
I love it! It would be so awesome if you wrote another full-length story or even just another short one like this!
I love it! It would be so awesome if you wrote another full-length story or even just another short one like this!
6/6/2017 c1 AF
This is one of my all time favourite series ever. It's better than a lot of published books I've read. Gemma was the perfect protagonist - strong, but also vulnerable. That's something very few authors get right. Boone was so endearingly flawed and I appreciate that he didn't just overcome his demons overnight.
Thank you for all the work you put into these characters and storyline. It was phenomenal.
This is one of my all time favourite series ever. It's better than a lot of published books I've read. Gemma was the perfect protagonist - strong, but also vulnerable. That's something very few authors get right. Boone was so endearingly flawed and I appreciate that he didn't just overcome his demons overnight.
Thank you for all the work you put into these characters and storyline. It was phenomenal.
4/26/2017 c1 Guest
Loved this series! Read all three stories in two days! Hope there's more
Loved this series! Read all three stories in two days! Hope there's more
1/15/2017 c1 Guest
Very cute, I absolutely love these two and your world. I especially love how much attention to detail you have and how there are like zero plot holes, always makes reading more enjoyable. Keep writing!
Very cute, I absolutely love these two and your world. I especially love how much attention to detail you have and how there are like zero plot holes, always makes reading more enjoyable. Keep writing!
1/11/2017 c1 Adoore
I felt bittersweet the entire time I read this. I'll miss these two. I will check in again soon. Thanks for this though!
I felt bittersweet the entire time I read this. I'll miss these two. I will check in again soon. Thanks for this though!
12/15/2016 c1 4Cassadaga
Ok I finished reading this a couple days ago but haven't had the chance to review. I thought it was great! I really loved the formatting of showing his life before and after Gemma in snapshots (and the way you titled each segment as a countdown). Not only was it unique, I thought it suited Boone's character really well. Living one moment to the next, not really thinking ahead or long-term...And I liked how you characterized him and how Gemma looked in his eyes (I mean her character, not her physical appearance).
And I liked that you left it open-ended. I didn't need to see a wedding or kids-that sort of fluffy ending doesn't suit these guys. I mean, long-term maybe it does, but for these gritty stories I think it would've been too cookie-cutter an ending. I liked that it ended with them simply being comfortable and content with each other. It's a simple but real ending, which is really a fitting end to the tough times they've had. That said, I would be happy to read more about them!
Also I really liked the bit where Boone met her family. And the second-last snapshot of Boone just being happy by himself. Gemma has made him better, but he doesn't rely on her for happiness. I think that's just great and a good thing to highlight in a character..
4CassadagaOk I finished reading this a couple days ago but haven't had the chance to review. I thought it was great! I really loved the formatting of showing his life before and after Gemma in snapshots (and the way you titled each segment as a countdown). Not only was it unique, I thought it suited Boone's character really well. Living one moment to the next, not really thinking ahead or long-term...And I liked how you characterized him and how Gemma looked in his eyes (I mean her character, not her physical appearance).
And I liked that you left it open-ended. I didn't need to see a wedding or kids-that sort of fluffy ending doesn't suit these guys. I mean, long-term maybe it does, but for these gritty stories I think it would've been too cookie-cutter an ending. I liked that it ended with them simply being comfortable and content with each other. It's a simple but real ending, which is really a fitting end to the tough times they've had. That said, I would be happy to read more about them!
Also I really liked the bit where Boone met her family. And the second-last snapshot of Boone just being happy by himself. Gemma has made him better, but he doesn't rely on her for happiness. I think that's just great and a good thing to highlight in a character..
9/20/2016 c1 Guest
hi!
i keep re-reading vertigo, ricochet, and the rookie!
you're soooo good!
i hope you continue to write stories and keep sharing them with us. you legit have so much talent i'm a bit jealous! haha
anyway, thank you for your writing! whenever i'm in need of a good story, i know to always check out your profile.
i'm looking forward to reading more from you! xoxo
hi!
i keep re-reading vertigo, ricochet, and the rookie!
you're soooo good!
i hope you continue to write stories and keep sharing them with us. you legit have so much talent i'm a bit jealous! haha
anyway, thank you for your writing! whenever i'm in need of a good story, i know to always check out your profile.
i'm looking forward to reading more from you! xoxo
8/11/2016 c1 Guest
This is quite possibly theory adorable thing that I've ever read! I absolutely love love love it
This is quite possibly theory adorable thing that I've ever read! I absolutely love love love it
8/1/2016 c1 iamanacorn
You deciding to leave the ending open in case you want to continue writing in this world has just made my day :)
You deciding to leave the ending open in case you want to continue writing in this world has just made my day :)
8/1/2016 c1 Sinelle
Re-reading when I'm meant to be sleeping... love love love this story so much. I always come back in the hopes that you'll publish more!
This is by far my favourite part of the series. Boone's perspective is a brilliant perspective.
Looking forward to your future works!
Re-reading when I'm meant to be sleeping... love love love this story so much. I always come back in the hopes that you'll publish more!
This is by far my favourite part of the series. Boone's perspective is a brilliant perspective.
Looking forward to your future works!
7/24/2016 c1 2Roflmao101
That was a really cute piece! It was nice to see the clockwork that runs through Boones head. I love it! I think it's the perfect end to an outstanding series. You've outdone yourself! Xx
2Roflmao101That was a really cute piece! It was nice to see the clockwork that runs through Boones head. I love it! I think it's the perfect end to an outstanding series. You've outdone yourself! Xx