for Tasteful7/25/2016 c6 Wavern16 'Inactive
Dude! I loved how you looked up deviations for Lo and Taylor! Very creative! And my jaw dropped when I thought Corbin was going to kill him. I was like "OMG! Not Corbin! He may be unemotional sometimes but don't make him an unlikable bad guy!" LOL XD Poor Taylor and Lo. And yes, now I see the new reason behind Taylor's wings. Very cool! Great work!
Dude! I loved how you looked up deviations for Lo and Taylor! Very creative! And my jaw dropped when I thought Corbin was going to kill him. I was like "OMG! Not Corbin! He may be unemotional sometimes but don't make him an unlikable bad guy!" LOL XD Poor Taylor and Lo. And yes, now I see the new reason behind Taylor's wings. Very cool! Great work!
6/14/2016 c5 Wavern16 'Inactive
Ah man, you think I would be used to Taylor's constant passing out by now XD And concerned Lo is very touching, seeing how in the last story he was an asshole, but he was a loveable asshole! XD Great work as usual bud!
Ah man, you think I would be used to Taylor's constant passing out by now XD And concerned Lo is very touching, seeing how in the last story he was an asshole, but he was a loveable asshole! XD Great work as usual bud!
6/8/2016 c4 Wavern16 'Inactive
Ah man, sorry buddy, I forgot you updated :( LOL, this job is messing with my brain! JK XD Any who, great work buddy! It's so sweet to see Lo so concerned with Taylor! So kewt!
Ah man, sorry buddy, I forgot you updated :( LOL, this job is messing with my brain! JK XD Any who, great work buddy! It's so sweet to see Lo so concerned with Taylor! So kewt!
6/3/2016 c3 
10V.Ohara
Posting my review here since I already reviewed Chapter 1...I think...but I love the fight scene now that it's added! :) It breaks the scene up nicely!
10V.OharaPosting my review here since I already reviewed Chapter 1...I think...but I love the fight scene now that it's added! :) It breaks the scene up nicely!
6/2/2016 c3 Wavern16 'Inactive
Oh God! This is gonna get so hard to get used too! XD Lo being all laid back and concerned and Taylor being the paranoid and untrustworthy person! WHAT KIND OF UNIVERSE ARE WE LIVING IN ANYMORE! LOL, but I love how you added different flavors to Taylor's powers, and I love how you added slurs to Lo's speech, like he's more laid back. And dear God, I can't believe you're not writing slash! Are you sure you're feeling okay?! XD As long as you have Blaise, I still stand by when I say this is awesome, like all your other stories! Great work buddy!
Oh God! This is gonna get so hard to get used too! XD Lo being all laid back and concerned and Taylor being the paranoid and untrustworthy person! WHAT KIND OF UNIVERSE ARE WE LIVING IN ANYMORE! LOL, but I love how you added different flavors to Taylor's powers, and I love how you added slurs to Lo's speech, like he's more laid back. And dear God, I can't believe you're not writing slash! Are you sure you're feeling okay?! XD As long as you have Blaise, I still stand by when I say this is awesome, like all your other stories! Great work buddy!
6/2/2016 c2 V.Ohara
A fascinating piece! I had a bit of a problem with the bar scene as I felt it sort of ran on, like I could skip several lines and not miss anything new. Maybe a fight breaks out and Taylor can introduce some of the emotions that way, or a pair of lovers in the corner. Something to break up the scene a bit. But I like it! Very well written.
A fascinating piece! I had a bit of a problem with the bar scene as I felt it sort of ran on, like I could skip several lines and not miss anything new. Maybe a fight breaks out and Taylor can introduce some of the emotions that way, or a pair of lovers in the corner. Something to break up the scene a bit. But I like it! Very well written.