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I love the visual image that this poem creates for me. It certainly is Wonderland. Also, I don't know if it was intentional, but the enjambment works really well for the act of twirling at the end. Like the girl is prolonging her movement, mirroring the length of the sentence. I would give you constructive criticism, but I have none.

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