for The Reunion2/8/2017 c16 Steve.Kazuto.SAO
I'm not sure why, but somehow this story could be a bit longer than "The Balance of Survival". Weird I know..
I'm not sure why, but somehow this story could be a bit longer than "The Balance of Survival". Weird I know..
2/7/2017 c16 
18Kyt Lestrange
Hey there!
Finally the new chapter is out! I was so happy when I got the notification yesterday!
So, regarding this chapter, I found it pretty much calmer than usual in the sense that the action is going slower than previously. That's only my opinion and you're very much oblige to not taking it into account :P
Mama Solos is less cliché thant before, but you can still sense the Mama Bear Act beneath the surface. But as she said "One thing at a time"
I'm having mixed feelings regarding Gabe looking for his father. He can drop dead for what it's worth, but if he needs to find him like for closure and all, well so be it. But Sastre sounds pretty much French lol
Can't wait to see how the investigation's gonna turn out for the Barrett brothers father though.
Bon courage for this new semester and keep up the good work
Ricki
18Kyt LestrangeHey there!
Finally the new chapter is out! I was so happy when I got the notification yesterday!
So, regarding this chapter, I found it pretty much calmer than usual in the sense that the action is going slower than previously. That's only my opinion and you're very much oblige to not taking it into account :P
Mama Solos is less cliché thant before, but you can still sense the Mama Bear Act beneath the surface. But as she said "One thing at a time"
I'm having mixed feelings regarding Gabe looking for his father. He can drop dead for what it's worth, but if he needs to find him like for closure and all, well so be it. But Sastre sounds pretty much French lol
Can't wait to see how the investigation's gonna turn out for the Barrett brothers father though.
Bon courage for this new semester and keep up the good work
Ricki
1/10/2017 c15 Kyt Lestrange
Hey there,
Thanks for this new chapter and you're very welcome by the way :-)
You can keep the cliché :) it is so refreshing but if you feel like improving her character go for it :-)
Regarding this chapter :
- I just love the Barrett brothers, all three of them. The twins are really bringing something humoristic in this story. Carmine's behavior towards Gabriel is so funny. He treats him as part of the family. I just had a laugh imagining Gabriel being crushed against C's chest hahaha
Emilio just blew it regarding his brother's sexual orientation. I was like okay I wanna pull his heart out and turn it into dust but then I remembered that I wouldn't stand a chance in front of him.
I can totally understand their feeling regarding their father. They are humans.
- Garhett. It's blossoming, but please, please, pretty please, Don't let Gabe screw this. I know his a late 20ish virgin and never was in a relationship before Barrett came along. I know he has insecurities and all, but just because V slept on top of him all night and was tired afterwards, should not upset him. In fact he should have explore his body ;)
Keep up the good work and see you on the next chapter.
Ricky
Hey there,
Thanks for this new chapter and you're very welcome by the way :-)
You can keep the cliché :) it is so refreshing but if you feel like improving her character go for it :-)
Regarding this chapter :
- I just love the Barrett brothers, all three of them. The twins are really bringing something humoristic in this story. Carmine's behavior towards Gabriel is so funny. He treats him as part of the family. I just had a laugh imagining Gabriel being crushed against C's chest hahaha
Emilio just blew it regarding his brother's sexual orientation. I was like okay I wanna pull his heart out and turn it into dust but then I remembered that I wouldn't stand a chance in front of him.
I can totally understand their feeling regarding their father. They are humans.
- Garhett. It's blossoming, but please, please, pretty please, Don't let Gabe screw this. I know his a late 20ish virgin and never was in a relationship before Barrett came along. I know he has insecurities and all, but just because V slept on top of him all night and was tired afterwards, should not upset him. In fact he should have explore his body ;)
Keep up the good work and see you on the next chapter.
Ricky
1/10/2017 c15 randomjun
Didn't realize it's been a little bit since I reviewed. Still going strong, and liked the turn of events that was in this one.
Didn't realize it's been a little bit since I reviewed. Still going strong, and liked the turn of events that was in this one.
12/29/2016 c14 18Kyt Lestrange
Hey there!
Well, let just say that I found your story like right around the corner of mt search.
Took me a couple of days to go through all of it and can I just say that I want more!
Garhett ( I know, it does sound silly but I can totally see Val say it)is like my bew favorite couple for the last remaining days of 2016
I really love the character of Val. She is so funny and out in the open. So refreshing to have someone like that in your life.
Ms Solos sounds a little bit cliché in the way that she is like the archetype of the Latina Mama that can be seen on Tv. Nonetheless I really enjoyed her scenes.
The Barrett twins are really cool and stuff. Can't wait to see more of them.
Keep up the good work. You have my full support from France.
Can't wait to read more from you
Ricky
18Kyt LestrangeHey there!
Well, let just say that I found your story like right around the corner of mt search.
Took me a couple of days to go through all of it and can I just say that I want more!
Garhett ( I know, it does sound silly but I can totally see Val say it)is like my bew favorite couple for the last remaining days of 2016
I really love the character of Val. She is so funny and out in the open. So refreshing to have someone like that in your life.
Ms Solos sounds a little bit cliché in the way that she is like the archetype of the Latina Mama that can be seen on Tv. Nonetheless I really enjoyed her scenes.
The Barrett twins are really cool and stuff. Can't wait to see more of them.
Keep up the good work. You have my full support from France.
Can't wait to read more from you
Ricky
12/28/2016 c14 3Fryvi
Haha xD I'm definitely not relieved! But I guess it makes sense for them to wait a bit longer
3FryviHaha xD I'm definitely not relieved! But I guess it makes sense for them to wait a bit longer
11/20/2016 c12 LadyDe
Love this chapter. Barrett was so sweet and flustered. So glad he got a decent breakfast and blurted out that the next date be a home cooked dinner. The descriptions of his brothers meals was hilarious. Reminded me of my early attempts when I was first on my own. Is Mom going to cause issues? I'm gonna predict...yes!
Life does have a way of getting in the way of the doing what brings us pleasure. Take a much deserved rest this week and maybe start the next chapter? (smile) No rush, though. Enjoy your holidays.
Love this chapter. Barrett was so sweet and flustered. So glad he got a decent breakfast and blurted out that the next date be a home cooked dinner. The descriptions of his brothers meals was hilarious. Reminded me of my early attempts when I was first on my own. Is Mom going to cause issues? I'm gonna predict...yes!
Life does have a way of getting in the way of the doing what brings us pleasure. Take a much deserved rest this week and maybe start the next chapter? (smile) No rush, though. Enjoy your holidays.
11/20/2016 c12 randomjun
cutesy chapter. but nice. Loved the cliffhanger ending. Nice to see an update as always!
cutesy chapter. but nice. Loved the cliffhanger ending. Nice to see an update as always!
9/5/2016 c11 randomjun
I love Val and how she pushes Gabe. But I also have to give Gabe props for taking the leap. You've established pretty well how he is/was, and how he wants to change. This chapter, at the end of it, really showed that development. Helps that he's lovable, and loved how Barret reacted to Gabe's suggestion...I chuckled.
I love Val and how she pushes Gabe. But I also have to give Gabe props for taking the leap. You've established pretty well how he is/was, and how he wants to change. This chapter, at the end of it, really showed that development. Helps that he's lovable, and loved how Barret reacted to Gabe's suggestion...I chuckled.
8/29/2016 c10 Lavi
Awwwww noooo please don't make them fall apart now or something frustrating like thattttt
Awwwww noooo please don't make them fall apart now or something frustrating like thattttt
8/27/2016 c10 LadyDe
That darn 'deer in the headlights' moment reared it's ugly head! Now Barrett will think he's screwed up. He really should have told Gabriel that he is gay before the pier date. But the ball's in Gab's court now and he needs to clear the air with Barrett sooner rather than later. Right? Love the story so far. And I adore Val. She's a pip.
That darn 'deer in the headlights' moment reared it's ugly head! Now Barrett will think he's screwed up. He really should have told Gabriel that he is gay before the pier date. But the ball's in Gab's court now and he needs to clear the air with Barrett sooner rather than later. Right? Love the story so far. And I adore Val. She's a pip.
8/25/2016 c10 6Collins-A
You shouldn't change a character you created and love because a random reader is insulted by vulgarity. They don't have to read your story. Anyways, this was a lovely chapter! I didn't expect Barrett to kiss him so soon though! I also thought he wouldn't be the one initiating it TBH lmao.
Side note, how do you pronounce Barrett? I think I've been pronouncing it wrong, even though it looks simple.
6Collins-AYou shouldn't change a character you created and love because a random reader is insulted by vulgarity. They don't have to read your story. Anyways, this was a lovely chapter! I didn't expect Barrett to kiss him so soon though! I also thought he wouldn't be the one initiating it TBH lmao.
Side note, how do you pronounce Barrett? I think I've been pronouncing it wrong, even though it looks simple.