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12/20/2016 c1 pollyspocket
I like your writing, especially in the way you describe the beach, or "graveyard," with the "spiky and brown expanse," and the use of imagery of it once being a fish-filled lush place. I must admit it took me a moment to get into the story, as I was a bit confused at first, but then I began to understand the tone and message this piece holds. When looking at The Writing Challenge prompt this piece was written off of, I definitely think this is a creative look at it, with the sea creatures and their "graveyard."

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