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8/17/2016 c1 2Nicole Law
Wow that was a great first chapter. You caught my attention right away and I couldn't stop reading. I already love the friendship dynamic between the girls and Navid is of course, so dreamy. Can't wait for more!
8/17/2016 c1 8PequenaWrite
Can I just say that the description of the story itself got my immediate attention, and I knew that I had to read on. There were details that really rounded the story up well. The fact that Ashleigh shivers at her own reflection in the mirror before covering her face with the hood gives a good indication of her personality and that she is not happy.
It's really interesting to see the interaction between Leigh and Navid, she's obviously irritated by him, but the whole attraction aspect is definitely there... Despite the fact that she already knows he's a player. Very good beginning!

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