for House of Geeks1/15/2017 c1 
4ImmanenceEnsured
Frivy! I saw this story on plumblossom's favourite list and I was like: 'This premise sounds amazing, finally something I'm in the mood to read, let's check it out…' And now I'm halfway through chapter one and I notice it's you! So happy right now, I feel like I've found your story on this vast platform that is the internet, like a needle in a haystack, even though it's just fictionpress *
Okay, going to continue reading now. That line about the frienly faces in the comic book store had me smiling already.
4ImmanenceEnsuredFrivy! I saw this story on plumblossom's favourite list and I was like: 'This premise sounds amazing, finally something I'm in the mood to read, let's check it out…' And now I'm halfway through chapter one and I notice it's you! So happy right now, I feel like I've found your story on this vast platform that is the internet, like a needle in a haystack, even though it's just fictionpress *
Okay, going to continue reading now. That line about the frienly faces in the comic book store had me smiling already.
10/28/2016 c1 Collins-A
Things I disliked about Qued:
- How was Delon supposed to know it was him? Correct time and place doesn't mean her knows who to look for, even Qued was unsure if Delon was the correct guy.
- Asian or white? Those are the only two races to exist to him? Or you, the author?
- His name (though Delons name isn't much better.. How do you even pronounce both?)
- If anyone is the awkward one, it's him. Social manners and general niceness seem to elude him.. Delon just seems shy.
- Somehow I doubt Qued would be waking Delon up with weird noises in the night.
Things I disliked about Qued:
- How was Delon supposed to know it was him? Correct time and place doesn't mean her knows who to look for, even Qued was unsure if Delon was the correct guy.
- Asian or white? Those are the only two races to exist to him? Or you, the author?
- His name (though Delons name isn't much better.. How do you even pronounce both?)
- If anyone is the awkward one, it's him. Social manners and general niceness seem to elude him.. Delon just seems shy.
- Somehow I doubt Qued would be waking Delon up with weird noises in the night.
10/16/2016 c4 Cheddar-Graham
Dialogue-driven pieces aren't easy to write, but you're doing great so far.
Dialogue-driven pieces aren't easy to write, but you're doing great so far.
10/16/2016 c7 parker.aly
Wait... Would Qued be jealous? Haha they're so awkwardly cute. And their drunk hug hahaha
Thank you for this new chapter, I really enjoy your story and characters. I can't wait to read the next one ! :)
Wait... Would Qued be jealous? Haha they're so awkwardly cute. And their drunk hug hahaha
Thank you for this new chapter, I really enjoy your story and characters. I can't wait to read the next one ! :)
9/28/2016 c6 parker.aly
Thank you so much for this chapter! I don't know why no one else is reviewing, your story is so interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter :D
Thank you so much for this chapter! I don't know why no one else is reviewing, your story is so interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter :D
9/22/2016 c5 parker.aly
Yaaaaay a new chapter, thank you! Your story and characters are so originals, I really enjoy it :) looking forward to read the rest, I m so intrigued...
Yaaaaay a new chapter, thank you! Your story and characters are so originals, I really enjoy it :) looking forward to read the rest, I m so intrigued...