for Children of the Earth5/15/2017 c11 Guest
Really, a very wonderful read. Thank you! Hope you get published soon.
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Really, a very wonderful read. Thank you! Hope you get published soon.
:)
4/6/2017 c11 Guest
The story has a unique concept and I love it. Great job.
The story has a unique concept and I love it. Great job.
11/10/2016 c9 You'llNeverKnow
Noooooooooooooooooooooo! Ebow! :-(
Noooooooooooooooooooooo! Ebow! :-(
11/2/2016 c8 C. M. Brighid Bachleda
Idiots...
Killing a rabbit is not the answers...
Ignorant bastards...
Idiots...
Killing a rabbit is not the answers...
Ignorant bastards...
10/21/2016 c6 
7gulistala
I want to shred Talen, the pompuos, chauvinistic ass. How dare he, as if Enral is his for the taking? Just when there was hope?! What did he do to Finn? Is she in a coma or? Really hope she wakes up before the bamboo!
7gulistalaI want to shred Talen, the pompuos, chauvinistic ass. How dare he, as if Enral is his for the taking? Just when there was hope?! What did he do to Finn? Is she in a coma or? Really hope she wakes up before the bamboo!
10/21/2016 c5 Guest
Now we finally have the back story! Still doesn't explain why Vallor's people can't leave the kimgdom and become citizens elsewhere? Also why was the git Talen so fearful of Ebow?
Now we finally have the back story! Still doesn't explain why Vallor's people can't leave the kimgdom and become citizens elsewhere? Also why was the git Talen so fearful of Ebow?
10/5/2016 c4 7gulistala
And she can start by asking him how the curse started. I don't understand why she hasn't yet, it's obvious Vallor won't offer it.
I honestly didn't expect that. Wow like a horror-ridden scene but with an actual innocent purpose. Glad you updated!
7gulistalaAnd she can start by asking him how the curse started. I don't understand why she hasn't yet, it's obvious Vallor won't offer it.
I honestly didn't expect that. Wow like a horror-ridden scene but with an actual innocent purpose. Glad you updated!
10/2/2016 c3 gulistala
Wouldn't it make more sense if Finn asked how the curse started, if there's any information on the curse? It's like she's going in blind.
Really do wonder what happened 4 years ago and why the curse started, who cast it and so forth. Can't wait to read more!
Wouldn't it make more sense if Finn asked how the curse started, if there's any information on the curse? It's like she's going in blind.
Really do wonder what happened 4 years ago and why the curse started, who cast it and so forth. Can't wait to read more!
10/2/2016 c2 gulistala
His curse? Then why can't his people just leave the land him and let him take the brunt of it all?
His curse? Then why can't his people just leave the land him and let him take the brunt of it all?