for Revolver11/2/2020 c2 
851Jave Harron
I definitely enjoyed this story. It was well paced, well written, and each character had a distinct narrative voice. I got a strong Roland Deschain vibe from your protagonist. If there's one change I could make, perhaps a bit more detail of the immediate place. Other than that, great work.
851Jave HarronI definitely enjoyed this story. It was well paced, well written, and each character had a distinct narrative voice. I got a strong Roland Deschain vibe from your protagonist. If there's one change I could make, perhaps a bit more detail of the immediate place. Other than that, great work.