
9/27/2016 c1
70BradytheJust
Wow!
Your writing brilliance never ceases to amaze me, my friend! :)
"Filled with unspeakable horror" "Sounded as stunned as she felt" " To watch him turn to ash and blow away." Your word choice sucked me in as always and I felt connected to the characters.
Amazing job as always! :D

Wow!
Your writing brilliance never ceases to amaze me, my friend! :)
"Filled with unspeakable horror" "Sounded as stunned as she felt" " To watch him turn to ash and blow away." Your word choice sucked me in as always and I felt connected to the characters.
Amazing job as always! :D